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Venu has returned now to his native planet of Venutian. He was very impressed by what he learned on his Social Studies course. Based specifically on your studies on Lesson 1+2, advise Venu on policies he could implement in his own planet.
(notice key words in question that you should have highligted)
As Venu steps out of his spacecraft, his family cheers,"Venu's home". Venu begins to speak to his nation based on what he learned on his travels. Venu is tired of his country being a communist nation, so he plans to change his governement in some ways. Becoming a Republic with unique rights and responsibilities for its citizens, will be a goal for Venu's new governemnt. In a Republic, citizens elect representatives to make decisions on the citizen's behalf. Unfortunately, theese representatives sometimes vote in their own interests and not the ctizens. Venu will ensure that the citizen's representatives will vote fairly. Even though Venu does not want Venutian to be a 'direct demoncracy', he should inform his leaders about this alternative form of government. In a direct demoncrcy, everybody takes part in every decision. Direct demoncracy works well for small groups like clubs and neighborhoods. It would be took much hassle in Venutian to bring everybody together to vote on every decision. Venu should take the time to make sure his new system of government contains certain rights and responsibilities for its citizens. Some rights he learned about inthe U.S. include freedom of speech, freedom of religion, freddom to live and work where a citizen pleases. Venutian citizens will have certain responsibilites like voting, going to school, and obeying martain laws. All of these would be written in the Venutian constitution, or a plan of government. By implementing all these new policies, Venu will have success in changing his government from communism to a successful Republic. Venu finishes his speech and sits down drenched in sweat. The chief of Venutian rises and says to the natio,"It's time Venutian implements a real change to its government."
14 comments:
that essay really helped me understand what you were looking for in the essay.
Abigail
Wow that was a great essay by Will! He used practically no pronouns and had great descriptive sentences! Just like Abbie said, Will's example made me understand what Mr. Buxton is looking for in the essay. Thanks Will!!!
-Catie
Thanks for reading guys.
That was an amazing essay! I would give that an A+++++!!!
- Caroline M!
May the articles from the paper be from the sports section?
-Forrester
yes Forrester
It was a fantastic essay because when i was reading it i felt like i was there. i probably couldn't have written it that well with all my notes and my textbook. i could tell Will put a lot of time into studying his notes and reading the 2 lessons in his textbook.
Great job Will! I really liked it and it was a good refrence for essay's. Great work!
- Mary Grace
For our spelling homework, do we have to do the writing part at the bottom? Like writing our own thing so we get the concept.
- Caroline Mackey
I know this is way off topic, but are we going to learn about World War 1 and 2 along with The Great Depression this year.
This essay really helped me because I got the main idea of what an essay is after I read it. It also helped me understand good power 2's and powers 3's not just for this essay, but it will help me with others too.
Great Job Will!!
- Sarah Neely
Hayden... i wish we could. we only look at American History. There is no reason why you can't choose one of the those topics when we do a research activity.
sarah - Thank you for your comment. Glad you found Will's essay valuable. +1 for taking the time to look.
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