Not the best, but this at least gives an idea of what the speech delivery might sound like...
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
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Mr. B said 2/3 of a page 1 page max
Abigail
Oh thx Abigail I thought to do like 2 pages though I'll have to cut out useless sentences Oh well
Would this sentence be a 3O sentence???
With furious faces, tired of paying taxes, they chopped open the cargo filled with tea and dumped it into the ocean.
Would this be one also?
Soon colonists got extremely angry with England.
Can someone please tell me What is 3rd person omiscient. I was not in school Monday.
Thanks, Charlie
whats a 30 sentence
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also should our 3rd person thing have dialogue in it
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Maddie- who is they?
how was cargo boxed?
what type of tea?
which ocean/harbor?
BE SPECIFIC!!!
show 'angry' don't tell
Charlie...look at post onblog ...it give definitions and examples
but should it have dialogue
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please answer asap like in 9.857463836475384563945634534657395873485269857234563479685349576 seconds
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MR BUXTON!!!! I WENT TO ASK.COM......AND THE QUESTION OF THE DAY WAS WHO SAI D "GIVE ME LIBERTY OR GIVE ME DEATH" AND I ANSWERED PATRICK HENRY....I GOT IT RIGHT....I JUST THOUGHT THAT WAS KINDA COOL!!!!:)
Is the back of the vocab thing we did with mrs. moore due tomorrow?
Abigail
No Ryan becuse then it would be 1st person... i think?????....
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How many different versons of this speech are there????
ya...it is abbie
only one...but we are doing the most famous parts cause it is SUPER long
The homework sheet says the Vocab for the speech is homework for tommorow. Is that right because Mrs. Moore told us to do it tonight? Please Help!
Abigail
vocab not due tomorrow...
ryan can have some dialogue.. not much
my dad was reading the newspaper while i was practicing the patrick henry speech and he read something that said today was the same day that patrick henry gave his speech!!
yup...
Awesome Sabrina and MC!!!!!
-ansley
mr. b,
is it ok if I have a sentence and 1/2 on a second page???
-ansley
Ansley it is probably ok...
Sarah
ansley it is probably ok...
would it be okay if I only put two people in my thing about the Boston Massacre and is this a good sentence: On the cobblestone feet of King Street during an unusually chilly night on March the fifth, while John Goldfinch's frostbitten hands were almost frozen solid to his think woolen mitts.
That's a good sentence, but I would use more than two people.
- M.G.
can somebody please help me with the proclamation act because I am a little confused.
for the Patrick henry vocab thing.........what paket is that in
Flynn
Oh thanks Flynn I almost forgot. It isn't in a packet, it is it's own piece of paper.
arn't there 2 sides ...... what does the front look like?
Flynn
Found it hahaahah
so is our homework...
-finish science text
-math booklet pgs. 10,11
-work on final copy of narrative
-study for test
-Patrick Henry vocab
-ansley
ya i think
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do we need to know about the battle of lexingto and the virginia resolves for the test
i would just in case i think so
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actually i dont think so
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HELP! buxtons- didnt mrs grahm say we didnt have 2 be done with our sun thing by 2morrow????????????!!!!!!!
well the grahams do
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Its due friday...... about the state report party/talent show..... is he going to have a thing up were you can write your name down on the paper .... do you guys think he will have it up for tomorrow and friday..
Flynn
OMg
i really dont know
AAAAAHhhhhhhhhhhh
McCarthy,
She said ours isn't due until Friday.
Flynn,
Probably tomorrow.
Can anyone post the vocab words and definitions up?
why me
why do you say tomrrow
The talent show sign ups
ok thanks
sabrina - no
david- run on sentence.. .good, but needs better punctuation
ansley ...yes but prioritize.. what is 'just' needed for tomorrow
caroline m - in your packet
flynn yes and yes
Are the definitions in there or can I just look them up on the internet?
Ok can someone tell me EVERYTHING we need to know for the test?
Do we need to know who George Washington and Paul Revere are?
paul revere yes george washington probaly the WHOLE thing for the sun isn't due tom. just the written part
Buxton class isn't
on the test do you think that there will be multible joice for vocab?
Flynn
Yes
- M.G.
So about 4-5 bullet points about everything on the mind map??
For the test 2morrow
I mean every category
ASAP, please!!!!!!!!!!!
nevermind i found it out...
Is tomorrow a SOAR Day?
Juliana
how long exactly should our paper be
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how long exactly should our paper be
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Yes, It's COLLEGE SPIRIT DAY!
Abigail
Ryan it should be 2/3 of a page with 1.5 spacing.
Abigail
yes collage spirit unless you are embarrassed to show your favorite collage because they are in the NIT (cough cough unc)
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So our homework is
-Science booklet (Buxton)
-Math Booklet 18,19,20
-Omiscient Narrative
-Patrick Henry Speech vocab
-Vocabulary Book
I think that's it. Just want to make sure.
Abigail
Ya i am pretty sure thats all, but vocab test is WEd. nxt week
I completely redid my 3o narritive because my first one was terrible. Please make changes to this one. Thanks so so much!!!!!!
Boston Tea Party
John Adams glances at himself into the mirror, not to see your average Son of Liberty, but an Indian chief standing before him. With a fur vest, brown moccasins waiting at the door along with John’s ax, brown cache pants, and a colorful headdress of every kind of bird’s feather you could imagine, he glanced at the sun setting among the hills and realized it was time. John quickly slipped on his moccasins and sprinted out the door with his sharp ax. John raced down worn, cobblestone streets until he approached his brother, Samuel, along with all the other Sons of Liberty.
Tonight, they were no longer the Sons of Liberty, but a small Indian tribe. With a strait face, feeling terrible and destructive about the Tea Act, Samuel silently lead the Sons of Liberty to the boat transporting tea from the East Indian Tea Company in Britain. As John boarded the ship of tea, he began to chant. “Rally Mohawks, bring out your axes, and tell King George, we’ll pay no taxes!” All the Son’s voices together boomed throughout the port yard. Each Liberty brother picked up their axes behind their heads and swung at the cartons of tea with such power they burst open full of West Indian tea, and they would then dumped it into the Pacific Ocean. Not knowing weather to feel good about chopping open the loads of tea, or feel furious about the tea tax, William, another Son of Liberty, swung away at the cargo of tea.
By the time the news had been delivered to King George III, he stood in front of his parliament with his face as red as lava, his hands clutched into tight fists as if about to pound somebody, and his eyes were glaring. It was obvious he was furious, and screaming inside. “This is intolerable, un except able behavior, unlawful, and un loyal to me, and Britain!” he screamed. “Boston must be punished!”
Maddie Weber
Hello everyone it's Catie. PLEASE check out my narrative on the NARRATIVE COMMENTS SECTION thanks!
-Catie
what do u mean Catie??
oh nvrmind. ok i will
That was REALLY GOOD!!!!! A+ probably, but would Samuel Adams really be smiling about breaking open the tea? I was only asking because in the first place they were breaking open the tea because they were mad about the tea tax. And it was a little long
can u read mine, Catie????
Okay if it is supposed to be 2/3 of the page I am in big trouble because mine is two pages is that true?
Amazing job Maddie! It will surely do good. When I was talking about Sam Adams, I meant he was smiling because this was good payback for the Boston Massacre and he was happy how his crew was acting on the boats. oh did I mention yours was AMAZING!!!!!! -catie
Juliana,
He said 1 page max. just put font smaller,
ok i will try
juli
I put it down so it would fit on one page and now it is font size 7
Its ok i think if it fits on a little more than one page. maybe do size twelve and do one and a half line spacing. I am sure Mr. b would rather it be long than not good ( i a, sure yours is!)!
not likely i am not very good at the whole omniscient writing thing.
juli
remember to have confidence juliana! you are only as good as you think you are!
okay okay
oh yeah i had a picture in the right spot on one computer but the printer is out of ink so i had to print it on my bro's and he has pages not word and so it didn't have the same font and so it changed so the pictured moved. Is that ok?
and i know that was a really long run on sentence.
juli
Juliana what was the picture for???
-ansley
My narrative is 1 page and the second page has like 1 sentence. Is that ok?
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