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Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Qtr 2 Week 1 Day 3 Essay Writing

You are in the process of writing two pieces: 
Your monthly reading  response about your book (Due: Fri)
Your non-fiction essay (Due: Next Tue)

Tonight's Priorities
1) Write one topic sentence and two (or three) power 2s. 
REMEMBER the Do's and Don't about  writing P1 and P2s
2) Math H/W (Thur)
3) October Book Reading Response (Fri)
4) Vocaroo (Fri)
5) Social Studies - Knovio preparation - Think about just creating certain slides (Next Tue)

Make sure you use your power plans to outline both these peices before you begin.
Make sure you are writing with advanced sentence structure in  both pieces

49 comments:

Anonymous said...
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Anonymous said...

http://www.wallwisher.com/wall/nakulscottharrisen
FOR Scott and harrisen

Rachel L said...

what vocaroo?

Rachel L said...

For Jacqueline and Rohan go the my blog for the wallwisher

berrysweetπ said...

the vocaroo for the reading fluency. look on the week at a glance sheet.

Rachel L said...

oh thanks anisha

Rachel L said...

the wallwisher will be on the left and under information links

Caroline said...

Rohan,

Our wallwisher is

http://www.wallwisher.com/wall/thailandflood2011

Caroline

Canada rocks said...

Mr.Buxton I forgot to get my math book at school. Can I find it on the website and print it then do it.Or can Harrisen pdf it to me from his computer. thanks Mr.Buxton

Rachel L said...

Mr.Buxton would this be okay?
Power1: Ferdinand Porsche was a very talented man
Power2: He created Porsche Other Power2: He design Volkswagon Beetle
Or is that giving examples
and do I do power 3?

Rachel L said...

how many pages can my reading letter be?

berrysweetπ said...

too specific rachel. but do you know what you're power 3's are? if you don't already, that is probably too specific

Rachel L said...

thanks anisha but is the whole thing too specific or the power 2s

Caroline said...

Maddy,

Don't foget to bring you headband tomarrow for the social studies thing.

Rachel L said...

yeah i think your right the power 2 are too specific. then what do i do???

George said...

Mr. Buxton,
How do I make you a member of my blog again?
Thanks,
George

Canada rocks said...

Ice hockey, a fun sport, has a very interesting history. P1

Playing ice hockey means getting a lot of penalties. P2
20.
13.
15.
People are playing Ice hockey all around the world. P2
16.
17.
21.
#= P3's sorry its all messy but heres part of my home work Mr.Buxton thanks for being such a great teacher!!!!! :) :) :) :)

Canada rocks said...

dono rachel

Maya S. said...

Hey my Plymouth group, the wallwisher is up. I gave you guys the web address at class today.

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Caroline said...

Maddy and Maya,

Han is making a wallwisher for the plymoth thing at the same URL.

Anonymous said...

maya your email is what? You're not going on the Prezi. Should I resend the form thing

Canada rocks said...

nukul why did you put are research on the blog WHY :( :( :( :( :( :(

Caroline said...
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Jacqueline said...

Is the book club meeting tommorrow?

Han said...

http://www.wallwisher.com/wall/gdfxcfs this is the wall wisher for my group Plymouth

Unknown said...

Scott- if i read your topic sentence... what do i expect your essay to 'only' be about.. see if you can all see what i mean... this is the key to essay writing

berrysweetπ said...

could i start topic sentence with a be there statement?

Anonymous said...

sorry scott Its OFF Now!

berrysweetπ said...

this is my first power 2: the ENIAC, Electronic Numerical Integrator and Computer, is usually the answer one will receive when asking "What was the first computer?".

would you think the rest of the paragraph is about the ENIAC in all or about why that would be the answered as the first computer?

berrysweetπ said...

may we please learn the lesson on how to get rid of "the". That word is haunting me!

berrysweetπ said...

emma emma emma emma emmaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! CURRENT EVENTS ON FRIDAY!

AJDForTheFuture said...

Could I say this-

P2: From 77 trophies to the second richest teamin the world, Barcelona surely have nothing to lose.
P3:Barcelona, having won 77 trophies in all, are the number one team in the world.

AJDForTheFuture said...

Anisha- In your expository booklet, there is a page about starting with the and there is'.
Page 4.

AJDForTheFuture said...

Could this be used?

Topic sentence: Barcelona, the monsterous spanish team, has some amazing, and almost unreachable secords.

berrysweetπ said...

alex i know there is a page that 's how i knew there was a lesson on it somewhere. but the sheet doesn't exactly tell you in so much detail how to remove the the

berrysweetπ said...

one website says that the z1's clock speed was 1 hertz. what does that mean?

AJDForTheFuture said...

Any tips on my P1s,2s, and P3s?

Maddy Z said...

Scott, your power 1 is pretty good, but your power 2's are not related to your power 1. How are penalties related to ice hockey's history?

Maddy Z said...

Han, that's not our wallwisher - the one you made. Today in class we agreed Maya would make one. She gave us all the URL for it.

Maddy Z said...

Caroline, thanks for the reminder! I'll bring it in!

berrysweetπ said...

my group on Jamestown- wallwisher:

http://www.wallwisher.com/wall/jamestownpresentatio

sabine, you have to approve of every post on the one you made.

berrysweetπ said...

in the expository booklet you gave us, there are the transitional words.

AJDForTheFuture said...

Wallwisher for Maria, Riya, and I: www.wallwisher.roanokeisland/

berrysweetπ said...

Power 1: Even though modern computers have been around for a long period of time, there were a multitude of different , interesting, and unique "magic machines" that lead to today's Macs and PCs.
Power 2: ENIAC, Electronic Numerical Integrator and Computer, is usually the answer one will receive when asking, "What was the first computer?".
Power 2: The abacus has played a majorly significant role in today's computers.
Power 2: Subjectively, Z1 may be old- school, but , like the abacus and ENIAC, was essental to the evolution of computers.


Any tips? I'm a bit worried about the last power 2, as it has four commas. Mr. Buxton, in this context is this okay?

berrysweetπ said...

Nakul and Zach- remember for your morning announcements: The PTA pumpkin sale is only on saturday.

Rachel L said...

hey if anyones goal was vocabulary what was the website to get the words?

berrysweetπ said...

rachel this is the website. you might want to copy it to your blog so you will always have it.

http://insidestoryflashcards.com/printable_flashcards/index.php

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