Titanic Essays - Due tomorrow. Look at these links to make sure you are presenting your essay correctly.
https://docs.google.com/a/sas.edu.sg/document/d/1Of5fPXU5kAFJcjOPwJNcmHjEe50atuvEmIDWFOOSUBc/edit
https://docs.google.com/a/sas.edu.sg/document/d/1JfZXb_BlWJ5-wVZFSzEKaLHxDU5K84QlXzm-NXQmrp4/edit
Do NOT forget to restate the key points (probably a restate of one of your best p3 from each p2) that prove your thesis statement at the end of the essay.
Do not forget to bring in your Science tools etc. for Mrs. Clayton.
Math
Study Link 11.6
Make sure you are ready for your book club grand conversations and presentations later in the week.
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
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I don't have access to either of those google docs
Maddy /Caroline. Can you make your docs. public so other people can see them. Don't allow others to edit.
ok
i did. also, camille and sabine i have queso sause (cheese) that ends in o 4 the imovie l8tr.
what things for science????
it u have to bring stuff for the project that u made up
Caroline your question made NO sense.
maddy breann rachel and aditya(the people at my table in science class)- we don't have to bring anything right???
MR.BUXTON- didn't we do the math study link, 11.6 along time ago??
MR.BUXTON- didn't we do the math study link, 11.6 along time ago??
Camille and Sabine- Here is a chatzy for our book club project. camille check you email for the password and send it to sabine please
http://us7.chatzy.com/78651858747349
nevermind about the password camille. there is none
no we skipped it nick
Have I missed anyone?
My bookclub group -
Here is our chatzy:
http://us7.chatzy.com/89702937632682
I still cant access the 1st one
Try with your SAS account.
Does anyone know what the law's minimum amount of lifeboats and how many the titanic actually had?
Mr.Buxton I don't have access to my last p2 and all my p3s.
Mr.Buxton I don't have access to my last p2 and all my p3s.
mr.buxton do we need to have a hook
and mr.buxton how long does the essay have to be
I might not come to school tomorrow guys because I have asthma Mr.Buxton.
Mr.Buxton!
I think I might have left my medicine at school is there any chance I can get it sometime tomorrow.
I need it!
You guys is this correct comma usaage? I think it is...
The captain of the Titanic, Edward John Smith, and the designer, Thomas Andrews, caused the sinking of the Titanic.
yes han...
WAIT!! so we need a hook or is our hook our thesis??
Can anyone(mainly the grammar polices out there)please help me with my sentece fluncey, grammar mastakes. Also please comment on my work, and tell me if I have to work on anything, or change anything. Thanks!
“The sounds of people drowning are something that I cannot describe to you and neither can anyone else. It’s the most dreadful sound and there is a terrible silence that follows it.” Eva Hart quoted experiencing a dreadful memory as a seven year old Titanic survivor. The legendary RMS Titanic clearly was a devastating, fruitless project to the decadent ocean liner industry White Star Liner of the 20th century. The inadequate safety feature disgusted Thomas Andrew, and the crew who structured the Titanic. After the legendary sink of the Titanic, the loss of the decadent and capital was massive waste in investments. However the loss of so much prominent citizens was a huge loss.
The loss of so many prominent citizens was preposterous definitely not justifiable to the world.”Ever man for itself” exclaimed Captain Edward John Smith at 2:30 pm. Losing one of the most prominent captains in the White Star Lines industry caused pain to one of the most luxurious ocean liners that ever sailed the oceans. Luxurious men were nothing but the opposite of trivial to the Titanic crew that sailed the seas during 1912. However when John James Aster died it was quite palpable that money in the Titanic went down massively considering John James Aster was the most wealthiest passenger in board. Furthermore Thomas Andrews were one of the most well known ship builders around that time in the 1900 century. Sadly being the ship builder she must have felt a lot of shame once he died during the ice berg attack.
“Professionals built the Titanic amateur ark” quoted Frank Deeper. Money and decadent meant the world to the Titanic sadly when the ship crashed into the iceberg the hips investments were considered lost as a rich legend, and so the luxury on the ship. Swimming pools with heated ocean water costed at least more than a million dollars. On the other hand the ships foundation, like building the ship, buying the material, and putting all the luxury into the Titanic to make the ship the most luxurious ocean liner in the world costed about $7.5 million dollars, which was about $400 million today. Additionally the dinner was full of wealth, but just the cutlery must have costed a fortune considering the first class serving plates were golden rims and second class was delicate china.
After the legendary Titanic sink, people questioned and thought the inadequate safety features caused the Titanic to sink. I feel that the little fracture of the hull steel contributed to the Titanic disaster. However the high sculpture content increases the brittleness of steel by disrupting the grain structure. On the other hand, people always pounder about the fact that the Titanic sink was caused by the trivial thought that the Titanic did not need so much life boats, and only then would be just enough because the Titanic was known for being “unsinkable”. Sadly also the Titanic was low on rivets, which could also be a possible theory on what lead to the Titanic sink.
The RMS Titanic was a great disappointment, and was a very fruitless project. The safety features that caused the Titanic to sink were very preposterous, and the deaths of so many prominent citizens were not justifiable. However the decadent and capital loss on the Titanic was a big waste of investments after the RMS Titanic sunk. On the other hand, even though the Titanic was a huge disappointment to the White Star Line ocean liner industry, the Titanic will always be a beautiful, symbolic legend.
ok, thanks Nakul
Well, u don't need a hook Carter, but good writers have a hook
Mr. Buxton said to put the thesis at the top of your writing.
And you need to color code your essay
sentence fluency needs a lot of work Riya
You are using the word decadant incorrectly. - you are alos using it too often ... 'financial loss' seems better
-too long for one sentence-
Money and decadent meant the world to the Titanic sadly when the ship crashed into the iceberg the hips investments were considered lost as a rich legend, and so the luxury on the ship. Swimming pools with heated ocean water costed at least more than a million dollars.
do we have any science homework?
does anyone know the name of the lady who paid one of the crew workers on a life boat to not let anymore people on the lifeboat even though there was alot of space?
No Rohan we do not. Mr.Buxton is there a way to correct my sentece fluney errors. Can you please tell me the senteces that are trivsl, or ambigous to you becuase sentece fluncey so I can change it. Thanks.
No Rohan we do not. Mr.Buxton is there a way to correct my sentece fluney errors. Can you please tell me the senteces that are trivsl, or ambigous to you becuase sentece fluncey so I can change it. Thanks.
Also Mr.Buxton otherwise if I change my sentece fluncey and check the word decadent, was it good or a essay thats worth an S+?
My science group- remeber to bring 10 toothpicks
Riya- Here's how you can fix it:
Money and decadent meant the world to the Titanic. Sadly, when the ship crashed into the iceberg, the hips investments were considered lost as a rich legend and the luxury on the ship. Swimming pools with heated ocean water cost at least more than a million dollars.
no rohan we just have to bring in any of the stuff that we said we were gonna bring in for our made up experiment
camille and sabine. we can figure out who is going to be who in the imovie 2marrow because i only use certain charecters, not them all.
My book club I will send you the iMovie I made for the end. I didn't use animoto because I could be more precise with my timing on iMovie
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