Fragments and Run-ons Explanation
Videos
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X4rN48QVyFQ
www.edzone.net/~wohltjen/StAIR_Fragments_Runons.ppt
http://www.uvu.edu/owl/infor/test_n_games/practice_tests/fragments.htm
http://www.shsu.edu/~txcae/Powerpoints/prepostest/fragrunonpostest.html
http://www.glencoe.com/sec/writerschoice/gp/hslessons/grade9/lesson8/exercises.shtml
http://www.quia.com/rr/450895.html
http://www.quia.com/rr/450936.html?AP_rand=1888308509
Comma Splice
http://depts.dyc.edu/learningcenter/owl/exercises/comma_splices_ex1.htm
do exercise 2 also
http://faculty.valleycollege.net/apal/run-on_quiz.htm
http://www.writing.eng.vt.edu/exercises/grammar1.html
Exercise 1+2 only (exercise 3 only for experts!)
Only for experts...
http://www.chompchomp.com/csfs01/csfs01.01.htm
(Hard but fun to do!)
Videos
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X4rN48QVyFQ
www.edzone.net/~wohltjen/StAIR_Fragments_Runons.ppt
http://www.uvu.edu/owl/infor/test_n_games/practice_tests/fragments.htm
http://www.shsu.edu/~txcae/Powerpoints/prepostest/fragrunonpostest.html
http://www.glencoe.com/sec/writerschoice/gp/hslessons/grade9/lesson8/exercises.shtml
http://www.quia.com/rr/450895.html
http://www.quia.com/rr/450936.html?AP_rand=1888308509
Comma Splice
http://depts.dyc.edu/learningcenter/owl/exercises/comma_splices_ex1.htm
do exercise 2 also
http://faculty.valleycollege.net/apal/run-on_quiz.htm
http://www.writing.eng.vt.edu/exercises/grammar1.html
Exercise 1+2 only (exercise 3 only for experts!)
Only for experts...
http://www.chompchomp.com/csfs01/csfs01.01.htm
(Hard but fun to do!)
62 comments:
i had to leave early because i fell on my back on the blacktop so i don't really get some of the homework please help me
RyAn S.
do what you can...i'll go over what ou are confused about tomorrow
clarifacation- what are the 3 sss techniques????!!!!.....
RyAn S.
never mind thx
RyAn S.
We didn't learn them in class today ryan, so he said to forget about it...
Anyways i'll type up the notes we did in class for you (the hand writing ones)
-scn
k thx SaRaH
RyAn S.
Do we get 2 +points for beating the millionare game? One of the questions on the game is just an introductry phrase, but the game says that it is a sentence. It starts with In order to... Would someone see it also and give their opinion?
Ryan:
The notes we did in class were:
TITLE: Commas, Fragments, and Run on sentences
C= Advance Compound Sentence
Independent Clause (IC) ; (semi-colon) Conjunc. Adverb , (comma) IC
ex: Charlie went home;however, he forgot his homework
O= Opening (interductory)
-Dependent Clause
ex: when he cane out ,
-prep. phrases
ex: On Saturday ,
-transitional words
ex: Spesificly
-infinitive
ex: to do well in school
-partisible phrase
ex: (verb+ing) kicking & screaming
M= non-essential information
ex: appositives
A BIG TIP: If info. is general- you don't need a comma
IF info is is specific- you need a comma
ASK YOUR SELF THIS QUESTION: Is the sentence the same without the info.
M= Misc. Uses
ex: when you use it in numbers 20 , 000
or with dates 24th July , 2009 or in names
Smith , Steve...etc...
A= coordinate Adjective
- can you reverse the adjective?
- can you put and in the adj.
ex: The big, green man
ex: The big and green man
S= In a 'series'
use commas in a list of 3 or more items joined by AND, OR, or NOR
ex: Put the magazines, books, and leaflets on my desk
__________________________________________________
Then we wrote a paragraph about our person using ALL of comma rules
__________________________________________________
I hope this helped you and i hope you get well soon...
-Sarah Neely
mr.buxton...i don't think we talked about the 3 sss techniqes sentences in class today. do we have to do that?
MC - know you don't
Sarah +2 for helping a classmate
(good notes by the way!)
Ryan...i saw you fell on your back today... are you ok. get better soon. i am sooo sorry that happened.
Never mind about the three sss techneques
thanks everyone. i am feeling better. thanks sarah for the notes.
RyAn S.
forrester- yes
Ryan- Does that mean yes we get 2+ points?
-Forrester
forester u do get 2 plus points if you win in millionair. Just print out the YOU HAVE WON $1,ooo,ooo page and bring it it into school and show mr.buxton and he will give you 2 plus pints, but you have to win first before you do all that
yeah what she said forrester
Mr. B.- My computer won't allow me to print the page that says "you won!."
forrester- as long as you are honest, i think you can tell him tomorrow and he will probably give you +2!!!!????.....
RyAn S.
Mr. Buxton.-
I'm not going to be at school tomorrow (Nov.4.2009) because i am sick... is there any notes or worksheets you could email to my mom because i don't have an email and she might email you just to make sure everything i might need will get to my house...
I would sort-of like to have the sheets before school ends just so i can maybe get a little bit of a head start...
Thanks,
Sarah Neely
Forrester-
Did you try cliking command P or file print
because i have a mac desktop and both of those work great for me...
-Sarah Neely
November 2009
Su M Tu W Th F Sa
1 2 3 4 5 6 7
8 9 10 11 12 13 14
15 16 17 18 19 20 21
22 23 24 25 26 27 28
29 30
which week are we out for thanksgiving????!!!!.....
RyAn S.
same with me
The twenty fifth.
- Mary Grace
Sorry to hear you are going to be sick Sarah. I will send you the SSS sheet. Start working on your character sketch first draft. Look at the mandela example and create you hook, topic sentence (giving your general overall opinion and p2s (other opinions related to your topic)make sure that your p3s carryt plenty of facts and also opinions based on the facts. Most important... make sure you follow the C.O.M.M.A.S. rules and don't do any sentence run-ons. You will be expected to use at least a couple of SSS techniques in your writing when you get the sheet
Take care.
Thanks
Mr.B.
-scn
mr buxton...do we have to bring in our ruff draft in tomarrow for the character scetch?
mc- no. thx 4 your concerns
RyAn S.
MC-
I think you might have to but i don't think that it has to be completely finished
LIKE I SAID "I THINK" i may be wrong and if i am i am am very, very sorry...
-scn
mc-no we don't
Jackson said...
mc-no we don't
Ryan what does "thx" mean i get all the other things but it might be easier if you used the correct spelling and the proper english/american...
Thanks,
Sarah
sarah-thnx means thanks and i think i am just going to do a ruff draft just in case
Yeah,
I figured that out after i hit "publish your comment"
Sorry Sarah
Also will someone in the H. Graham's type up there notes for me on the blog that are neat, acurate, and good notes. I am sick today so i missed school.
Thanks,
Sarah Neely
can someone tell me what the my docks thing is
RyAn S.
never mind
sure, Sarah.
Stylin Super Sentences- (S.S.S. techniques)
Advanced non-fiction sentence construction templates.
Use A + B+ C to represent facts
1.) From to - sentence
OR
From To And - sentence
Commas in a series; RESTATE SENTENCE
Ex. From risking her own life and being tortured, Irena Sendler never gave up the pricless information to the Gestapo.
2.) A+B+C -sentence
Sentence- A+B+C
Compund subject or predicate
3.) Not only, (A) but (also)(B)- sentence. IC
We also got a gold paper that explains styling super sentences
Here are the notes for our essay
Can you see your hook???? Picture/Youtube- DO NOT DO THIS ALONE!!!
Title- name of your person
Power '0'
(author of person who said quote or anyomos)
Hook- describe the person/pyhiscail appearance/describe typical day/work
Topic- Strong, general opinon ( ABC)
P2- Background/family/Life/Early life/
P2- Accomplishments
P2- Impact on their world. Did they change?
Restate: to conclude, to reterate, (mention your key judgement)
Why aren't they called(Super Stylin Sentences)??????????It just make s more sence,and it sounds better.
It does.
Thanks,
That was really helpful see you at school tomorrow...
-scn
Your well??!!! Yea!!! See ya at school!
- Mary Grae
see everyone at school tomorrow if i go
RyAn S.
if you go? are you sick?
Hopefully he's not, but mabey it's just an act.
I lost in pig pog 2-11
i lost 4-11
mr. buxton. how many pages is the test
flynn
flynn, Mr.Buxton IS NOT HERE tonight.
i know mary grace. you know the comma version of rags to riches. i cant find it.
flynn
I found it on the mac but not on my computer. how about yours????
flynn
Hold on, let me look for it....'
- Mary Grace
Found it.
http://www.quia.com/rr/82028.html
The test is 5 pages. He said that earlier in class.
Caroline- there no essay's or paragraph writing. Right??????????
No idea, although I'm not Caroline.
-M.G.
proubly maybe
flynn
Well Hayden think about it. It is a grammer test, not a writing test. You may have to do something were he gives you a paragraph and you have to correct it, but there will probably wont be an essay!
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