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Feel free to share some of your best sentence (s) that you create in your narratives on the blog. State what type of sentence your are sharing e.g. sensory, figurative, action, emotion, use of proper nouns, quotes etc... Other students are encouraged to give polite, respectful constructive feedback where possible.
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
Friday, November 20, 2009
Personal Narratives
Feel free to share some of your best sentence (s) that you create in your narratives on the blog. State what type of sentence your are sharing e.g. sensory, figurative, action, emotion, use of proper nouns, quotes etc... Other students are encouraged to give polite, respectful constructive feedback where possible.
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Are we supposed to do the first draft, ot should we just do that narritive idea?
hayden
hayden~ narritive idea
RyAn S.
what are the similarities between climate and growing season???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..................
From what i read, because the cimate is moterate,warm, the growing season lasts lonmger.
hayden
ok
Mr. If we finish on the narritive idea thing, should we or can we start our rough draft because i'm not sure i will have time to start it.
hayden
does any of yall know how a delta is formed
I did that study sheet for the S.S. test on Mon. and it really helped me to prepare for what the questions will be like and the vocab. we need to know. Also, I think the vocab. will be matching because Mr.B said to be able to match the 13 words with their definetions. Did thta study sheet help anybody else?
hayden
A delta is formed from deposited dirt from a river Hannah if that's who you are. And don't call yourself Hannah Montana.
~hayden
thanks
Hannah Montana
So just to clarify, on the test for the essay portion we can write about any of the things we want or are you going to have a question????
~Sarah Neely
sarah- There are going to be 4 questions about the 4 topics we have covered and we have to pick 1 of the questions to answer. Hannah is probably Hannah Montana.
~hayden
~Sarah, I think Mr. Buxton will probably have a question that we cant choose but he might. ~Hannah Montana
I am HANNAH MONTANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For the test Mister Buxton, do we have to know exactly where the Capitals are Mister Buxton? Hannah Montana.
Woah! I'm confused! If Buxton's have vocab. test tomorrow, how come we haven't checked it yet???????? Also, are the two coasts that border the southeast the Atlantic coast and the Gulf coast??? Wait! One more thing our narrative 1st draft isn't due until Monday, right. RIGHT!!!!! Because someone called me and that's what I told them. ANSWER ME!!!!!! please:)
-Juliana
Juliana-both of our vocab. tests are tomorrow. You're right about the 2 coast. I don't know about the narritive, but i'm just doing the narrative idea thing because of the tests that we have to study for.
Juliana,
yes the narrative is do on Monday I am just doing the little out line thing. Vocab test is tomorrow but you could get someone in your family to chaeck it.
Abigail
oh sorry i forgot to put HAYDEN under the post.
~HAYDEN
Anyone, for homework do we have to do the ruff draft, the mind map, or both?
-Sabrina
also for my first question if we do one instead of another will it be counted as a homework policy?
-Sabrina
I JUST DID THE MIND MAP AND I WILL DO THE RUFF DRAFT OVER THE WEEKEND. IF YOU DON'T HAVE TIME THIS WEEKEND DO IT TONIGHT!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T DO IT TONIGHT IT PROBABLY WON'T BE A HOMNEWORK POLICY.
~HAYDEN
Hayden, what if you don't do the mind map will that be a homework policy?
-Sabrina
Sabrina,
I just did the mind map and he told my class just to finish brainstorming. Which is the mind map.
Abigail
Hayden you don't have to do everything in caps! Sabrina, you can do your "rough draft" any way you want to. For instance, you could do a min map, the actual thing, or anything else. Oh yeah, Mr. B is possibly at the Panther's game. F.Y.I.
-Juliana
I am confused y'all. Can you get the best of both worlds if you do it over the weekend?????
~Hannah Montana
I also did that Abbie!:) Or kind of I did it in a different way at least.
-Juliana
Thanks Juliana and Abbie but do you think you would get a homework policy if you didn't do a mind map?
-Sabrina
Abigail Wedding~ the Panthers don't start until 9:30.
Sabrina-No, it was just a suggestion, but the Buxon's HAD to do it i think because they started it in class.
Hannah Montana-they start at 8:30 not 9:30.
That is what I ment HAYDEN HUNLEY!!!!!!!!!!
~Hannah Montana
So,
I never heard anything about anything being due apart from studying for the test, but i know that we are supposed to do the mind map but that is due Mon. or Tues..?????
~Sarah Neely
Sarah- the ruff draft is due Mon. and the final copy is due Tues. U don't have to the min dmap, but it will help. It did for me.
Sarah- the ruff draft is due Mon. and the final copy is due Tues. U don't have to the min dmap, but it will help. It did for me.
Sorry for posting that comment 2 times and post who u are under your comment "Hannah Montana"
~hayden
Sarah, the mind map isn't ever due I think but the ruff draft for our narrative is due on either Mon. or Tues. I'm bringing it on mon. just in case.anyone I'm still confused. Would you get a homework policy if you didn't do a mind map?
No Sabrina, and the final copy is due TUESDAY!
~hayden
Hey guys also before you ask a question see if we haven't already answered it.
-Juliana
Howdy y'all. I am workin' on my essay practice so if you need me, just say you need the best of both worlds.~Hannah Montana.
Y'all, what's a syninim for there is/there are?
~Hannah Montana
Hannah, it might depend in what context you use it in.
-Sabrina
Mr. B- Do we get a bonus point on the test if we staple our mind maps to the back of it?
-Forrester
How many natural resources and crops do we need to know for the test?
-Forrester
Forrester,
i don't know if he still does that
~sarah
1.There is no place to go.
2.Looking around fearfully, Johnny realizes that he had no place to go.
~hayden
Forrester, he probaly won't tell you because that's the same as telling you what's on the test
-Sabrina
What do you mean Sabrina?
~Hannah Montana
(I am not Hannah Burlingame.)
Think of all of the natrual resourses and crops you know. If you know 4 of each you will be fine.
~hayden
What are 3 mountain ranges in the Southeast?
One of them is aps...
try to think of the rest...
~sarah
I know the apps and the smokeys but i dont know what the other one is.
aps= appalachin mountains
-sorry
Oh yeah,
Well the smokies are in the aps, wait what question are you on????
~SCN
The three mountain ranges are, Appalachian, smokey,and I'm not sure of the last one.(Just guessing) Also the question when it says what is the relationship of the growing season and it's climate do you guys know the answer?
-Juliana
Juliana- it is "Because the climate is so hot, the growing season is lomger."
-Forrester
Yeah,
I got the relationship is that when the climate is warm/hot the growing season last longer and when the climate is cold the growing season is shorter...
~Sarah Neely
Sorry you pushed "publish your comment" like 3 second before i did...
~Sarah
Thanks! Also the other mountain I think was the Rocky Mountains
-Juliana
Sorry guys I got to go get ready for bed and put my things away. See ya tomorrow!!!
-Juliana
WAIT I JUST REMEMBERED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IS TOMORROW A SOAR DAY AND ARE YOU SURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Juliana:(
The Appalachian Mountains are some awesome mountains that run through N.C. and Tennessee right?
yes
What are some historical places in the Southeast?
Did you say yes that tomorrow is a soar day?
Historical places are kitty hawk, barrier islands, cumberland gap, and that's all I got know.
-Juliana
Sorry, when I said know I meant to say now.
-Juliana
Yes, tommorow is a soar day
~Hannah Montana
I mean today.
does anbody other than me think that the test was relatively easy except for 2 or 3 of the true or false questions?
~hayden
Hayden- I do agree that test was fairly easy. What essay did you choose?
-Juliana
THE ONE ABOUT THE MUSEUM VISIT.
MR.B.- WHEN SHOULD I DO MY PERSONAL NARRITIVE AND WHEN IS IT DUE? oR SHOULD I DO IT AT ALL BECAUSE I'M LEAVING IN A COUPLE OF HOURS?
~HAYDEN
Is this a good opening for my narrative. It is about Africa.
Seeing the dirt airstrip for the 13 sitter plane was a miracle because I had known I had made it this far.
Abigail
Abbie, no ..you are mixing your tenses (seeing and had known)
only use the time shift when you want to talk about the action of the story when you are already in the past tense..
i would just use your sensory and descriptive language to open and set the scene..
describing the landing is a good scene to start .. but just focus on the dscription not the the action as well
Thanks Mr. Buxton
Abigail
Mr. B I'm trying to create an effective opening and closing statements but they are really difficult! Also my narrative is kind of long is that okay?
-Juliana
Mr. B I was doing the daily english practice and sometimes the option is NULL what does that mean?
-Juliana
Mr. B- On the golden check sheet it says at least 12 proper nouns but my story was such a long time ago I don't remember exact names. So, could I just make them up?
-Juliana
Is there a limit on how many I's we can use?
-Juliana
on the golden sheet what does it mean by six FEELING words?
-Juliana
Juliana, by feeling words it means emotions
but how emotions? like it made me feel...?
-Juliana
juliana, it would be like grateful terrified glad joyful and so on
Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- Juliana
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