As a small suburban family fails to find an entertaining and unique place to visit, the oldest and wisest child optimistically suggests going to the majestic state of Nevada. From the majestic monuments and sculptures to the gorgeous buildings Nevada’s attractions are amazing. Nevada’s delightful venues are probably the most impressive ever to be seen. Strangely, a popular destination is Fleishmann Planetarium because tourists say the images and models are very pristinely done. Madame Tussauds Wax Attraction figurines are commonly mistaken for real people with their realism. The Luxor Hotel, a large pyramid shaped hotel, has a giant Sphinx ‘guarding’ it. Another wonderful family place is M & M World which tourist comment is mouthwatering and fascinating altogether. In Nevada, multitudes of historical places scattered about. Carson City is the capitol and families could see the capitol building. Nevada may not have as many celebrities as California but The Lahontan Dam, a dam between Fallon and Carson City Nevada, is meant for irrigation and for extra water uses. The Virgin Valley Heritage Museum posses’ artifacts from 1875 to 1935. Bootleg Canyon, near Boulder City, Nevada, is so amazing because it’s a large canyon where bikers and cross-country runners from even France, Spain, and even Japan and it’d be spectacular to participate. Nevada posses beautiful scenery of mountains, statues, and monuments that are entertaining to visit. The House Made of Bottles, an astonishing site, is in fact made by a man named Tom Kelly created this house almost entirely out of bottles. Though Paramount Pictures has restored it, when a movie was shot and it had been damaged. Thunder Mountain Monument may be a large-scale sculpture; however, the monument is made out of strange objects like old boats, cars, tires, and other useless objects. Not only does Nevada, strangely, have an Eiffel Tower in Las Vegas but also it is half the size at about 540 feet tall. Couples visit this at night when all the lights are turned on. Ruby Mountains are popular mountains for hiking, hunting, and camping with families. As giant smiles spread across joyous faces the suburban family cannot wait to tell their other friends about their spectacular trip to the wonderful state of Nevada.
this is may 2nd component but I need to do A LOT of work to it and PLEASE comment.
Birthday girl- count how many is/are you have... Can you change some of the for more powerful verbs? e.g. Nevada’s attractions are amazing ..stand out when compared with other states
Juliana, maybe you could change the second majestic to something else because they are to close together. You probably could replace amazing with another word because people use it a lot. instead of saying "tourists say", you could say "tourist state" or something. " In Nevada, multitudes of historical places scattered about" isn't a full sentence because u need an are or something. "Nevada may not have as many celebrities as California but The Lahontan Dam, a dam between Fallon and Carson City Nevada, is meant for irrigation and for extra water uses. " isn't the greatest comparison. other that that, it is very good
The American alligator, Louisiana’s state reptile’s, feet squish as it strides through the mud on the banks of the Mississippi River. Louisiana contains a cornucopia of crops and other natural resources that put together the scenery, culture, and economy of this stunning area. Louisiana’s prime industry, petroleum products, relies on the overflowing non-renewable oil reserves found in the Pelican State. Louisiana leads the nation in known natural gas and petroleum reserves. Amazingly, petroleum can be found in all of Louisiana’s 64 parishes. The Tuscaloosa Trend, an underground region that runs beneath the southern region of the state, harbors copious amounts of natural gas. The roaring Mississippi River moves so many renewable natural resources to Louisiana that numerous experts consider it a natural resource by itself. All of the fish swimming in the in the Mississippi and the Gulf of Mexico, like Red Drum, Spanish Mackerel, and Cobia, present Louisiana with a chief fishing industry. The fierce, commanding river deposits fertile soil throughout the state. Hydroelectricity, electricity created from running water, is another valuable aspect that the Mississippi provides. Furthermore, the abundant soil deposited by the Mississippi stimulates the production of exceedingly valuable and renewable crops. Louisiana also goes by the name of “The Sugar State” because of the heaps of sugarcane, the plant used to create sugar, produced there. Louisiana’s principal cash crop is soybean. From rice and cotton, to corn and strawberries, ending with pecans and sweet potatoes, agriculture remains a significant business in Louisiana. Louisiana retains a variety of non-renewable minerals that can be located almost anywhere in the state. Louisiana maintains more salt than any other state. Sulfur stands as another mineral that Louisiana mines more compared to anyplace else nationwide. Coal, a vital mineral utilized to formulate electricity, lies among the numerous of Louisiana. Because of all the state’s forests, renewable trees are abundant in Louisiana. Astonishingly, forests cover over 50% of Louisiana. Paper mills dotted all over the land are due to the countless forests. From pine in the north, to oak in the east, and cypress in the south, the various trees of Louisiana contribute to its horde of natural resources. The alligator wades into the Mississippi and catches a White Perch, Louisiana’s state fish, to devour. The fish is a natural resource for both humans and alligators alike.
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also will people just tell me what we need to know for the test????? & what location???? & the 2 major mountain ranges in the US are... please answer...
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I almost already know all the states and capitols but poor Carson City, Nevada is last.
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Tourist Attractions of Nevada
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As a small suburban family fails to find an entertaining and unique place to visit, the oldest and wisest child optimistically suggests going to the majestic state of Nevada. From the majestic monuments and sculptures to the gorgeous buildings Nevada’s attractions are amazing. Nevada’s delightful venues are probably the most impressive ever to be seen. Strangely, a popular destination is Fleishmann Planetarium because tourists say the images and models are very pristinely done. Madame Tussauds Wax Attraction figurines are commonly mistaken for real people with their realism. The Luxor Hotel, a large pyramid shaped hotel, has a giant Sphinx ‘guarding’ it. Another wonderful family place is M & M World which tourist comment is mouthwatering and fascinating altogether.
In Nevada, multitudes of historical places scattered about. Carson City is the capitol and families could see the capitol building. Nevada may not have as many celebrities as California but The Lahontan Dam, a dam between Fallon and Carson City Nevada, is meant for irrigation and for extra water uses. The Virgin Valley Heritage Museum posses’ artifacts from 1875 to 1935. Bootleg Canyon, near Boulder City, Nevada, is so amazing because it’s a large canyon where bikers and cross-country runners from even France, Spain, and even Japan and it’d be spectacular to participate.
Nevada posses beautiful scenery of mountains, statues, and monuments that are entertaining to visit. The House Made of Bottles, an astonishing site, is in fact made by a man named Tom Kelly created this house almost entirely out of bottles. Though Paramount Pictures has restored it, when a movie was shot and it had been damaged. Thunder Mountain Monument may be a large-scale sculpture; however, the monument is made out of strange objects like old boats, cars, tires, and other useless objects. Not only does Nevada, strangely, have an Eiffel Tower in Las Vegas but also it is half the size at about 540 feet tall. Couples visit this at night when all the lights are turned on. Ruby Mountains are popular mountains for hiking, hunting, and camping with families. As giant smiles spread across joyous faces the suburban family cannot wait to tell their other friends about their spectacular trip to the wonderful state of Nevada.
this is may 2nd component but I need to do A LOT of work to it and PLEASE comment.
~Juliana
Birthday girl- count how many is/are you have... Can you change some of the for more powerful verbs?
ReplyDeletee.g. Nevada’s attractions are amazing ..stand out when compared with other states
that song was hard to understand and bad music but the whole song was pretty helpful
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr. Buxton!
ReplyDelete~Juliana:-)
DO WE HAVE ANY SCIENCE HOMEWORK?!?!?!?!
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no...not that i know of
ReplyDeleteNo, Juliana, we don't
ReplyDeleteJuliana,
ReplyDeletemaybe you could change the second majestic to something else because they are to close together. You probably could replace amazing with another word because people use it a lot. instead of saying "tourists say", you could say "tourist state" or something. " In Nevada, multitudes of historical places scattered about" isn't a full sentence because u need an are or something. "Nevada may not have as many celebrities as California but The Lahontan Dam, a dam between Fallon and Carson City Nevada, is meant for irrigation and for extra water uses. " isn't the greatest comparison. other that that, it is very good
Maddie
Okay Maddie, thank you. :-)
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is our spelling test tommrow?
ReplyDeleteplease answer...
sarah
no next fri. hope you feel better ! :)
ReplyDeletethanks so so so much Sabrina. And i think i will be at school tomorrow...
ReplyDelete~Sarah
Ummmm...
ReplyDeleteAlso on that website when ever i click on a capitals game the page says 'not found'
Any advice???
~Sarah
maybe try another website?
ReplyDeleteJuneo's in Alaska and Lincon's in Nebraska
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ReplyDeleteis our fun facts for are state report due 2 morow?
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How du we du thu fun facts?
ReplyDeleteCan we do it? Yes we can!
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ReplyDeleteluke yes and jackson try typing in intresting facts about....... on google
ReplyDeleteHawaii's a joy Jackson Mississippi and Springfield ILLINOIS!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThe American alligator, Louisiana’s state reptile’s, feet squish as it strides through the mud on the banks of the Mississippi River. Louisiana contains a cornucopia of crops and other natural resources that put together the scenery, culture, and economy of this stunning area. Louisiana’s prime industry, petroleum products, relies on the overflowing non-renewable oil reserves found in the Pelican State. Louisiana leads the nation in known natural gas and petroleum reserves. Amazingly, petroleum can be found in all of Louisiana’s 64 parishes. The Tuscaloosa Trend, an underground region that runs beneath the southern region of the state, harbors copious amounts of natural gas.
ReplyDeleteThe roaring Mississippi River moves so many renewable natural resources to Louisiana that numerous experts consider it a natural resource by itself. All of the fish swimming in the in the Mississippi and the Gulf of Mexico, like Red Drum, Spanish Mackerel, and Cobia, present Louisiana with a chief fishing industry. The fierce, commanding river deposits fertile soil throughout the state. Hydroelectricity, electricity created from running water, is another valuable aspect that the Mississippi provides.
Furthermore, the abundant soil deposited by the Mississippi stimulates the production of exceedingly valuable and renewable crops. Louisiana also goes by the name of “The Sugar State” because of the heaps of sugarcane, the plant used to create sugar, produced there. Louisiana’s principal cash crop is soybean. From rice and cotton, to corn and strawberries, ending with pecans and sweet potatoes, agriculture remains a significant business in Louisiana.
Louisiana retains a variety of non-renewable minerals that can be located almost anywhere in the state. Louisiana maintains more salt than any other state. Sulfur stands as another mineral that Louisiana mines more compared to anyplace else nationwide. Coal, a vital mineral utilized to formulate electricity, lies among the numerous of Louisiana.
Because of all the state’s forests, renewable trees are abundant in Louisiana. Astonishingly, forests cover over 50% of Louisiana. Paper mills dotted all over the land are due to the countless forests. From pine in the north, to oak in the east, and cypress in the south, the various trees of Louisiana contribute to its horde of natural resources. The alligator wades into the Mississippi and catches a White Perch, Louisiana’s state fish, to devour. The fish is a natural resource for both humans and alligators alike.
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ReplyDeletewhen is the test
ReplyDeletealso will people just tell me what we need to know for the test????? & what location???? & the 2 major mountain ranges in the US are... please answer...
ReplyDeleteby location does it mean north America? or 'between canada and mexico......
ReplyDeleteprobly between canada and mexico
ReplyDeletethat is a really helpful video
ReplyDeleteDo We Need to know Spelling for the States And Captitals?????
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