Make me laugh...
Make me cry...
Make me smile ...
Make me sigh...
Show me what deeply moved you...
Show me how you truly grew...
How will you create a special theme? - AMAZE ME!!!.. please?
e.g. Caroline Swimmer is writing her memories paper as a letter to her younger brother... (DON'T COPY THIS!)...What will you do???
e.g. Survival Guide for Charlotte latin Lower School...
e.g. How to Impress your next teacher...
How will you make your paper 'unique'?
Treasures in a Box by Pamela Harazim
(NO, you cannot write a poem.. but you could quote some poetry)
Come, look with me inside this drawer,
In this box I've often seen,
At the pictures, black and white,
Faces proud, still, serene.
I wish I knew the people;
These strangers in the box,
Their names and all their memories
Are lost among my socks.
I wonder what their lives were like.
How did they spend their days?
What about their special times?
I'll never know their ways.
If only someone had taken time
To tell who, what, where, when,
These faces of my heritage
Would come to life again.
Could this become the fate
Of the pictures we take today?
The faces and the memories
Someday to be tossed away?
Make time to save your pictures,
Seize the opportunity when it knocks,
Or someday you and yours could be
The strangers in the box.
What will your memories 'sound' like?
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
Mr. Buxton could I do like a children's book type story with no pictures so like if my baby cousin wanted to know my lower school life she would be a ble to?
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Abigail
yes.. but make sure you keep the language advanced
ReplyDeleteI am doing a road trip do you think that would be ok
ReplyDeletejuliana
very good juli
ReplyDeleteI will it would be for when she's older
ReplyDeleteAbigail
would a newspaper theme be good like article 1 etc.?
ReplyDeletewould need a little tweaking Hayden,, e.g. Front page... editor's column ...comic strips etc...it would still be needed to be written like an essay though
ReplyDeleteWhich do you think I should do more: a tv show or series or a family road trip?
ReplyDeletejuliana
that was handy, not me.
ReplyDeletedo the topics for the paper have to be all metaphorical or all physical????
ReplyDelete-ansley
i am a little confused on this whole memories paper i mean not like id get it but just how to make them laugh and cry and smile and all of that you know some examples would b nice!!!
ReplyDeleteand when we like present is there supposed to be a title??? i was thinking about doing like something that goes with what i think about the years in the even like 2nd grade= easy and then the odd years like 3rd=hard but idk
ReplyDeletewhat
ReplyDeleteIS THIS DUE TOMORROW 0:
ReplyDeleteMaggie - NIKE
ReplyDeleteWrite your very best. Write from the heart...the rest will take care of itself.
Juli - NIKE
Write your very best. Write from the heart...the rest will take care of itself.
Ansley -if you had to answer this question yourself... what would your answer be...? That's your answer!
I just finished my thing that i was going to submit for the cover of the book of 5th grade 2009- 2010.
ReplyDeleteI accidentally did it horizontally, so does that mean I have to start over????
ha probly not and who are you
ReplyDeletemaddie...just bring it to school tomorrow and see what happens.
ReplyDelete-ansley
could i do a ship sailing across the ocean
ReplyDeleteand wat do u mean by nike?
I HAVE NO IDEA ABOUT this....i took notes...but yall are saying like ur doing it about a family road trip!!!
ReplyDeletemr.buxton...i need help with all this..everyone is saying like that they are doing a road trip or a sailing boat...IM CONFUSED!!!! and are our p2's due tomarrow
ReplyDeletemc
are the p2's due tomarrow???
ReplyDeletefor the comic book in science, can someone please post wat we need for option 2?
ReplyDeleteMC You are just writing about your memories of Lower School. Do what you can tonight. You will have the whole week to finish this. some students are using a 'metaphor' approach ex. road trip... to talk about what Lower School was like for them...Others will just write about teachers, fieldtrips, friends, favorite projects etc etc...
ReplyDeleteNIKE... just do it!
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i dont know how to change the name
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thanks Ansley... Ryan s.- I wuz on my sister's email thats why
ReplyDeleteHow many or do i have to read any chapters of CHARLOTTE DOYLE?????
ReplyDeleteWhat is our homework???
Sarah
(PS left Thursday)
arah you have to read chapters 13 AND (notice the and) 14
ReplyDeleteSo do we have to finish our whole pencil and paper draft by tomorrow?
ReplyDeleteThanks
Abigail
THATS WHAT I WANNA KNOW
ReplyDeleteRyan & Abigail- No... Mrs. McIntosh said that what ever the homework sheet says thats what you do and the h/w sheet says due Wednesday.... my question is do we need 2 write out (or tyoe) a new copy... not our power plan????????
ReplyDeleteMcCarthy
well thats not what she said to us but whatever
ReplyDeletesomone please answer me
ReplyDeletemr fuller
mr
ReplyDeleteAre we able to just dot done ideas on our power plan.
ReplyDeleteAbigail
wat r the vocab lines for vocab?
ReplyDeleteMr. Buxton- is it ok if 1 of our power 3's is really long????????????
ReplyDeleteMcCarthy
Mr. B, could I do a journal of 5th grade?
ReplyDeleteplus, do we do intro+conclu. with the main body for wednesday, or just the main body of the essay?
charlie W...
ReplyDeleteOk one , i am doing a road trip and wanted to be original. :( two, i have REALLY long p2's, is that ok? and mine is 5 pages is that ok too?
ReplyDeletejuliana
MC, Vocab 9-15
ReplyDeleteIt's on page 9 of the charlotte Doyle
booklet
First 2 chapter sections. It's due wed this week.
ReplyDeletedon't know. I guess if u've been at latin for a while, a long paper isn't bad.
ReplyDeleteLike a metaphorical road trip? if you're doing a road trip, you could make the stops along the way different grades..
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ReplyDeleteMr. Buxton do I have permission to type it up?
ReplyDeleteAbigail
For my P2 1st grade i just told a story is that ok?
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Mr. Buxton
ReplyDeleteWould the narrative peice in the memory essay count as a power 3?
Paige
Paige - yes it would count as a P3
ReplyDeleteAbigail - Do you mean P3? P2 is your topic sentence. And yes, a story would be great.
Robert - answer you on what?
ReplyDelete- M.G.
For my metaphor I am doing like a pair of shoes. (it sounds bad when you say it like that)
ReplyDeleteShoes like 'shoes will come into your life, brand new and presitine. They'll leave your life worn but loved. And even though you loved your new shoes, your now-old ones are just as good' Then I would say something about LS and stuff.
I am not going to use what I just wrote, but that is a rough idea.
Would THAT be a good metaphor?
Also, our draft due tomorrow, is that like a rough draft? Are you going to revise that one.
Is there a certain place in the LS that has gotten increasingly more worn over the years?
Thanks
-M.G.
ASAP on feedback please
do u have to have a moral for every story you do???
ReplyDeleteand...is it ok if i do a story that happened during a carpool home from school???
-ansley
asap...please
ReplyDelete-ansley
Ansley - you probably don't want to do ALL stories and yes there should be a general moral.
ReplyDeleteLike I'm telling a story about that guest speaker Mahi or whatever his name was (if someone knows his name, I NEED to know it), but then I am going out of the story to talk about how it affected me.
But if it is just a small story in a bigger P3, then I guess not.
What is that guys name who was a refugee from Ethopia and came to the USA and got a schlorship to Harvard. He talked to use about not treating people like they were invisible....
What was his name!
-M.G.
thnx mg
ReplyDeletei know exactly who you're talking about but i can't remember his name!!!!
this is going ot kill me!!!!!!!
-ansley
Whats the topic supposed to be like
ReplyDeleteAbigail
Are we allowed to do the vocab lines on a vocab line.
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