Use these links below to review our work on appositives today
http://www.eslbee.com/appositives.htm
http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/appositive.htm
Enjoy Breck's Where I'm From Poem'
click link below
http://www.box.net/shared/k2lu65o6xr
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
breck's poem is really god i like that it ryhmed
ReplyDeletethank you for commenting GG.
ReplyDeleteWhen commenting always try to point to something specific that stands out for you
e.g. it rhymed, certain words, what it made you think about etc...
When work is posted on the blog, the idea is to be able to specifically point out what makes that work stand out and then hopefully replicate those ideas in your own future pieces.
Whose work will be next to be displayed digitally?
Feel free to post any of the appositive statements you wrote for H/W for comments if you like
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ReplyDeleteI like how she really told the reader more about herself.
ReplyDeletei love how she rymed and used lots of color
ReplyDeletei think breck did a really good job on her poem I liked how she used proper nouns and described every thing so well
ReplyDeleteI really loved how Breck used ryming words and how she was really descriptive by using different places in Charlotte. I also liked how she used her quotes but still tried hard to get them to ryme. By the way MR. BUXTON i was reading an easy book and i turned a sentence into a appostive!
ReplyDeletenice observation Liza... adding 'color' to writing makes it memorable
ReplyDeleteBravo Bekah, now see if you can read a 'difficult' book and do the same thing :-)
Okay ! I will try and do that in my historical fiction book I got from the libray!!!!!!!!! And is our spelling test next week or this week?
ReplyDeletethank you i think i am going to try it next time
ReplyDeleteIs that a question you could answer for yourself Bekah?
ReplyDeleteHi Mr. Buxton. I am trying to set up an account for Madison Cacheris. This is a test. Thanks.
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