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Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Swimming

This letter about swim classes was sent to your parents today. Make sure you have read it also.


How is your idea coming for the Animoto project? Do you have a CLEAR thesis statement that states your opinion? Have you listed you P2s?  Read Maya's ENTIRE essay again to make sure you are writing a PERSUASIVE argument and not just stating your opnions about a topic. Remember: You need to be persauding somebody to do something. We will start working on it in class tomorrow

123 comments:

Unknown said...

a4ebuxt1dcb7d

AJDForTheFuture said...

Whats that?

Han said...

For the girls- Mr.Buxton is says in the letter we DON'T WEAR our swimsuits under, but today didn't you tell me to WEAR my swimsuit under my clothes?

Han said...
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Han said...

I think Mr.Buxton was testing it this morning Alex

Han said...

Did anyone get the study links WITH the test review sheet??

berrysweetπ said...

that is only for the scoliosis testing. the next time we have swimming, we will change there.

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Han said...

Oh thanks Anisha

Rachel L said...

Happy 1 day before Birthday to.... What's Your mom name? And maybe a4ebuxt1dcb7d is code for..... umm...
And Han I would wear your swim suit underneath (for only this swim lesson) because the scoliosis test thingy is tomorrow and so is swimming

Rachel L said...

no I didn't get the review sheet for the test. But don't worry Han it's so far away.

Han said...

My Group for skit- what was our wallwisher again?

Han said...

Well...
Thanks Rachel!

Han said...

(Jenny)

Han said...

Mr.Buxton you have so many blogs!
I like teh 16 2.0 tools blog thingy.

Han said...

typo teh is the

berrysweetπ said...

click on the picture on the gadgets side on my blog. then you will see it yourself. (han)

Han said...

k thanks I will go now

AJDForTheFuture said...

Wow, that is a cool blog! What is it for???

berrysweetπ said...

http://willyou.typewith.me/p/Deforestation

my group= go here

berrysweetπ said...

what is what for?

Han said...

I am called Caroline beacause I was worried why she didn't come to school today and she had an ear infection. She can't swim for i year, which is very sad.

Han said...

typo i is 1

Han said...

thanks Anisha

Rachel L said...

is People who cut the line are annoying a good topic to work on?

Han said...
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Han said...

I think Mr.Buxton and Mrs.Buxton work on it together Alex

Han said...

Try thinking "is it REALLY arguable?"

Rachel L said...

han your a good friend you should be student of the week. Also I hope Caroline can come a watch us tomorrow. Poor Caroline.

Rachel L said...

thanks han I guest it not arguable

Rachel L said...

sorry wrong guest it guess

Han said...

Thanks Rachel and Caroline will come tommorow!

berrysweetπ said...

Rachel- I am not trying to say things again after you have decided not to do that topic, but for the topics you may chose, they have to be non-personal.

Mrs. Buxton said...

How did you find that Han? It's a secret!

Could be ... but you need to be very creative with your p2s. You need to make sure you are not being repetitive.

Rachel L said...

Hi guys I can't find my transitional word bank could someone scan it and put it on there blog. Thanks and sorry about that.

Han said...
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Han said...

Mr.Buxton what is the secret?

Rachel L said...

is this better for a topic? Babies Crying on the plane is agitating.

Rachel L said...

the secret is that Mr.Buxton and Mrs.Buxton work together on the blog.

Rachel L said...

And Anisha why can't it be personal

Han said...

I do not know how to scan it Rachel but...
Location- above,behind,by near, throughout,across bealow down off to the right against under onto in back of beneath along beside in frount of on top of among between inside outside around beyond into over.
Time- while first meanwhile soon then after second today later next at third tommorow afterward as soon as before now nextweek about when suddenly during until yesterday finally
Compare- likewise also while in the same way like as similary
Contrast- but still although on the other hand however yet otherwise even though
Emphasize a point- again truly especially for his reason to reapeat in fact emphasize

Han said...

That was a random guess!:)

Han said...

And those are some of the transitional words followed by
Conclude or Summarize-finally as a result to sum up in conclusion lastly therefore all in all beacuse
Add Information- again another for instance for example also and moreover additionally as well besides along with other next finally in addtion
Clafify- that is for instance in other words

Rachel L said...

I'm sorry han but I don't need the one that you posted at 4:57 I just need your last post.

Rachel L said...

if anyone wants to know the home work I put on my blog

Maddy Z said...

Rachel, it has to be NON-personal.

George said...

MY GROUP DO YOUR JOBS ON THE SCRIPT!!!!!!

Rachel L said...

why can't the animoto be personal?

Rachel L said...

What about this topic: Singapore shouldn't let aggressive dog into the country.

Han said...
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Han said...

Oh okay Rachel

Rachel L said...

thks han

Han said...

for what Rachel?

Rachel L said...
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Rachel L said...

sorry I thought u were replying to my last comment

Han said...

I also was

Han said...

Maybe you could try looking at the animoto Mr.Buxton made and really think about your topic

AJDForTheFuture said...

Rachel- I disagree with your topic: Therefor, it is a good topic, and arguable.

berrysweetπ said...

okay- this is just for Emma- your characters are Kammy and Eco. Little teddy has been kicked off (get it? because little teddy loves to have fights?).

Quiz (not really. just for the people in my group) - Maya- which two characters are you?
Han- what two things are you?

Peace!

Han said...

My Team- go to my blog now.

Han said...

Anisha, I am the description person and narrator

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Han said...
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Han said...

Could somebody give an example of their thesis statement?

berrysweetπ said...

no, han. description and narrator are the same thing. you are narrator and sopisticated bear.

Han said...

oh, ok

Han said...

Could you answer my question?

Maya S. said...

Han- No.
Rachel- The persuasive Animoto can't be personal because Mr. Buxton said so in the post yesterday.
Anisha- I'm the angry birds and wimpy dog.

Han said...

Could somebody answer my question?

Anonymous said...

han tell me how to go to 16 please??

Han said...

Click on Mr.Buxton name on the top of the page

berrysweetπ said...

Topic: People destroying the oceans

Opinion: has to be stopped

Reasons: Animals dying, medicinal values, losing science, learning, and understanding of animals living in the water.

Anonymous said...

You mean Mr.Buxton's 5th Grade Class SAS

Han said...

Ohhhhh so that's what were suppose to do?

Anonymous said...

Whats anything-ever.webs.com anisha???

Han said...

No. Mr.buxton was the 1st to put a comment click on his name which is on the comment

Anonymous said...

It doesn't work Han!!

Anonymous said...

Oh that's so cool Mr.Buxton!!

Anonymous said...

George you made it view only!!!!

Anonymous said...

Mr.Buxton! On your family good times blog your camera was pointing at my house in another rainy day in singapore!

berrysweetπ said...

okay, what do you guys think of this sentence:

Burn and Eco, because the Earth's surface is only covered in 6% rainforest, don't you agree that animals who participate in deforestation should be penalized fr their dark deeds causing depression, sorrow, and ferocity to animals across the forest?


huh, huh?

berrysweetπ said...

Nakul, it is a website I made in 4th grade. As you can probably see, it needs some serious editing.

berrysweetπ said...

maya-please type up the WILF of this assignment. or anybody else.

Anonymous said...

bye!

Maddy Z said...

Anisha- the ANYTHING website has that 'you are the 1000th visitor thingy'! We just learned how bad those were on carnegie cadets!
Rohan- I need the old man's character description thing, please!

berrysweetπ said...

yes maddy. to get rid of those, i have to pay, so please just click on them. what's weird is that they think we have amnesia, and get everytime we click a button. once, that showed up three times in 1 day.

berrysweetπ said...

sorry, i meant to say please don't click on them. DO NOT CLICK ON THEM! I MADE A HORRIBLE TYPO!

berrysweetπ said...

ummmm...... someone needs to provide for the green bear. anybody have a green bear?

berrysweetπ said...

hey- can i just dress my build a bear in something green?

berrysweetπ said...

http://www.dreamtimenewfs.com/A%20Team/Graphics/Orange%20Bear.jpg


or i can blow up this and carry it around as orange bear. but a care bear acting as orange bear would be better.

berrysweetπ said...

Mr.Buxton, the last wilf reads: Clear use of sound effects, choral voice.....


do we have to have this?

berrysweetπ said...

we have 50 minutes to practice on Friday, right? or 30? or something?

Han said...

Sure Anisha

Han said...

Good Night See everyone tommorow bye

berrysweetπ said...

han- to your description,we may have to add some story.

berrysweetπ said...

http://www.commentsyard.com/graphics/good-luck/good-luck16.gif


green bear

Han said...

Where can we post comments?

Canada rocks said...

here

Canada rocks said...

mr.buxton what home work do I not have to do!!!!!!!
:) :) :)

Rachel L said...

100th comment and oh no I forgot my math study link could someone help me

Rachel L said...

also everyone on my team for the puppet thing. go to the wall wisher.

Canada rocks said...

Rachel search it up on line thats how I didn't get in trouble for forgetting my stuff at school

Canada rocks said...

.....1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rachel L said...

thks scott

Han said...
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Rachel L said...

scott I can't find it on the internet. Where is it?

Canada rocks said...

Bye every one I'm going to perth get there at 11 pm annoying!!!! If thats not all your questions then ask me on tuesday

Canada rocks said...

type (study link 6.1 every day math) in search.

Rachel L said...

go to these website it might help you think of what to wear for colonial day.
Girls
- http://www.thinktanktoys.com/cache.php?img=http://img.thinktanktoys.com/images/vendors/rubies/927-main.jpg

http://i01.i.aliimg.com/photo/v0/107017127/Dashiki_African_Style_sundress_Women_Dress_We.jpg

Boys
http://cdn.costumesupercenter.com/csc_inc/images/items/343x432/R10051.jpg

http://cdn.costumesupercenter.com/csc_inc/images/items/343x432/DU218.jpg

Rachel L said...

Everyone can I just clarify this is the page

https://452429803925162775-a-saline-k12-mi-us-s-sites.googlegroups.com/a/saline.k12.mi.us/elearning/e/fifth-grade/math-unit-6/5th_HomeLink6.1.pdf?attachauth=ANoY7cou6hhak8JAxXeYH36A6QOi04nvi8LeFEE1PNVaEb2J2Az2b88jzrGf0LztPR4HuVW985aZ59HJz3ZSbFpJ0vM2qlZpKWgwLHhzvIYV_XKqI1QeqEPmC3XpmoxzFex_qrflk9PT3nGQGHlCPE6pzJlo-OlheweDGMgSKe3hNS7jbaO9u7Cmg9wVlnpFykc2CddRnrPHEYpgI_SrrCbMzBBeoHAowCeOn0_hTsF8F9gJrtvH6ZoU4ciEwrUJAhUjknDBxgSM&attredirects=0

Han said...
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Rachel L said...

for some reason IXL won't let me in. I typed in: username: rachellee799 password: sas123 and it still won't let me in.

berrysweetπ said...

maybe you mistyped something?

my group- to get to the type with me: search: type with me. click on it. go to the new version. then type in exactly: Deforestation. Capitals count. no period.

Maddy Z said...

Rohan, where is the old man's character part? Did you type it up yet? Please either put it on your blog or put it on the wallwisher as early as possible!

Han said...

which IXl are we suppose to do?

Rachel L said...

s.10
for IXL

berrysweetπ said...

need to add my finishing touches to the script before I finish typing up the script for you guys to rehearse. Sorry!

Han said...

Thanks Rachel

Han said...

It's okay Anisha, its not your fault. You did a lot of work

Maddy Z said...

Rohan! Please! I NEED your character part!

Camille B. said...

RAHAN!!! WERE IS THE CHARACTER DISCRIPTION I LOOKED AN YOUR BLOG THE WALLWISHER AND HERE WERE ELSE CAN YOU PUT IT!

Maddy Z said...

I need it by eight thirty at the latest, Rohan, and if you can get it to me sooner, please do that. Thanks!

Han said...

good night everyone

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