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Wednesday, November 30, 2011

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This letter about swim classes was sent to your parents today. Make sure you have read it also.


How is your idea coming for the Animoto project? Do you have a CLEAR thesis statement that states your opinion? Have you listed you P2s?  Read Maya's ENTIRE essay again to make sure you are writing a PERSUASIVE argument and not just stating your opnions about a topic. Remember: You need to be persauding somebody to do something. We will start working on it in class tomorrow
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  1. UnknownNovember 30, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    a4ebuxt1dcb7d

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  2. AJDForTheFutureNovember 30, 2011 at 3:56 PM

    Whats that?

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  3. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 3:56 PM

    For the girls- Mr.Buxton is says in the letter we DON'T WEAR our swimsuits under, but today didn't you tell me to WEAR my swimsuit under my clothes?

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  4. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 3:56 PM

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  5. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 3:57 PM

    I think Mr.Buxton was testing it this morning Alex

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  6. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    Did anyone get the study links WITH the test review sheet??

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  7. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    that is only for the scoliosis testing. the next time we have swimming, we will change there.

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  8. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:01 PM

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  9. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:02 PM

    Oh thanks Anisha

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  10. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    Happy 1 day before Birthday to.... What's Your mom name? And maybe a4ebuxt1dcb7d is code for..... umm...
    And Han I would wear your swim suit underneath (for only this swim lesson) because the scoliosis test thingy is tomorrow and so is swimming

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  11. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    no I didn't get the review sheet for the test. But don't worry Han it's so far away.

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  12. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    My Group for skit- what was our wallwisher again?

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  13. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    Well...
    Thanks Rachel!

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  14. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    (Jenny)

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  15. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    Mr.Buxton you have so many blogs!
    I like teh 16 2.0 tools blog thingy.

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  16. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    typo teh is the

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  17. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    click on the picture on the gadgets side on my blog. then you will see it yourself. (han)

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  18. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    k thanks I will go now

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  19. AJDForTheFutureNovember 30, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Wow, that is a cool blog! What is it for???

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  20. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    http://willyou.typewith.me/p/Deforestation

    my group= go here

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  21. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    what is what for?

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  22. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    I am called Caroline beacause I was worried why she didn't come to school today and she had an ear infection. She can't swim for i year, which is very sad.

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  23. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:38 PM

    typo i is 1

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  24. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:38 PM

    thanks Anisha

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  25. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:38 PM

    is People who cut the line are annoying a good topic to work on?

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  26. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:39 PM

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  27. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    I think Mr.Buxton and Mrs.Buxton work on it together Alex

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  28. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Try thinking "is it REALLY arguable?"

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  29. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    han your a good friend you should be student of the week. Also I hope Caroline can come a watch us tomorrow. Poor Caroline.

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  30. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    thanks han I guest it not arguable

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  31. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    sorry wrong guest it guess

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  32. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:43 PM

    Thanks Rachel and Caroline will come tommorow!

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  33. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    Rachel- I am not trying to say things again after you have decided not to do that topic, but for the topics you may chose, they have to be non-personal.

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  34. Mrs. BuxtonNovember 30, 2011 at 4:45 PM

    How did you find that Han? It's a secret!

    Could be ... but you need to be very creative with your p2s. You need to make sure you are not being repetitive.

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  35. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    Hi guys I can't find my transitional word bank could someone scan it and put it on there blog. Thanks and sorry about that.

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  36. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:48 PM

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  37. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    Mr.Buxton what is the secret?

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  38. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    is this better for a topic? Babies Crying on the plane is agitating.

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  39. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:56 PM

    the secret is that Mr.Buxton and Mrs.Buxton work together on the blog.

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  40. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    And Anisha why can't it be personal

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  41. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    I do not know how to scan it Rachel but...
    Location- above,behind,by near, throughout,across bealow down off to the right against under onto in back of beneath along beside in frount of on top of among between inside outside around beyond into over.
    Time- while first meanwhile soon then after second today later next at third tommorow afterward as soon as before now nextweek about when suddenly during until yesterday finally
    Compare- likewise also while in the same way like as similary
    Contrast- but still although on the other hand however yet otherwise even though
    Emphasize a point- again truly especially for his reason to reapeat in fact emphasize

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  42. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    That was a random guess!:)

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  43. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 5:02 PM

    And those are some of the transitional words followed by
    Conclude or Summarize-finally as a result to sum up in conclusion lastly therefore all in all beacuse
    Add Information- again another for instance for example also and moreover additionally as well besides along with other next finally in addtion
    Clafify- that is for instance in other words

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  44. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:11 PM

    I'm sorry han but I don't need the one that you posted at 4:57 I just need your last post.

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  45. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    if anyone wants to know the home work I put on my blog

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  46. Maddy ZNovember 30, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    Rachel, it has to be NON-personal.

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  47. GeorgeNovember 30, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    MY GROUP DO YOUR JOBS ON THE SCRIPT!!!!!!

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  48. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    why can't the animoto be personal?

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  49. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    What about this topic: Singapore shouldn't let aggressive dog into the country.

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  50. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 5:47 PM

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  51. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    Oh okay Rachel

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  52. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:50 PM

    thks han

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  53. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    for what Rachel?

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  54. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    This comment has been removed by the author.

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  55. Rachel LNovember 30, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    sorry I thought u were replying to my last comment

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  56. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    I also was

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  57. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    Maybe you could try looking at the animoto Mr.Buxton made and really think about your topic

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  58. AJDForTheFutureNovember 30, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    Rachel- I disagree with your topic: Therefor, it is a good topic, and arguable.

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  59. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    okay- this is just for Emma- your characters are Kammy and Eco. Little teddy has been kicked off (get it? because little teddy loves to have fights?).

    Quiz (not really. just for the people in my group) - Maya- which two characters are you?
    Han- what two things are you?

    Peace!

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  60. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:07 PM

    My Team- go to my blog now.

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  61. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:08 PM

    Anisha, I am the description person and narrator

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  62. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:13 PM

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  63. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:18 PM

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  64. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    Could somebody give an example of their thesis statement?

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  65. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 7:40 PM

    no, han. description and narrator are the same thing. you are narrator and sopisticated bear.

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  66. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    oh, ok

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  67. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    Could you answer my question?

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  68. Maya S.November 30, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    Han- No.
    Rachel- The persuasive Animoto can't be personal because Mr. Buxton said so in the post yesterday.
    Anisha- I'm the angry birds and wimpy dog.

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  69. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    Could somebody answer my question?

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  70. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    han tell me how to go to 16 please??

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  71. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    Click on Mr.Buxton name on the top of the page

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  72. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    Topic: People destroying the oceans

    Opinion: has to be stopped

    Reasons: Animals dying, medicinal values, losing science, learning, and understanding of animals living in the water.

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  73. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:49 PM

    You mean Mr.Buxton's 5th Grade Class SAS

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  74. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:49 PM

    Ohhhhh so that's what were suppose to do?

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  75. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    Whats anything-ever.webs.com anisha???

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  76. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    No. Mr.buxton was the 1st to put a comment click on his name which is on the comment

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  77. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    It doesn't work Han!!

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  78. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    Oh that's so cool Mr.Buxton!!

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  79. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:53 PM

    George you made it view only!!!!

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  80. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    Mr.Buxton! On your family good times blog your camera was pointing at my house in another rainy day in singapore!

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  81. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    okay, what do you guys think of this sentence:

    Burn and Eco, because the Earth's surface is only covered in 6% rainforest, don't you agree that animals who participate in deforestation should be penalized fr their dark deeds causing depression, sorrow, and ferocity to animals across the forest?


    huh, huh?

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  82. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:03 PM

    Nakul, it is a website I made in 4th grade. As you can probably see, it needs some serious editing.

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  83. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    maya-please type up the WILF of this assignment. or anybody else.

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  84. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 8:19 PM

    bye!

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  85. Maddy ZNovember 30, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    Anisha- the ANYTHING website has that 'you are the 1000th visitor thingy'! We just learned how bad those were on carnegie cadets!
    Rohan- I need the old man's character description thing, please!

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  86. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:36 PM

    yes maddy. to get rid of those, i have to pay, so please just click on them. what's weird is that they think we have amnesia, and get everytime we click a button. once, that showed up three times in 1 day.

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  87. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    sorry, i meant to say please don't click on them. DO NOT CLICK ON THEM! I MADE A HORRIBLE TYPO!

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  88. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    ummmm...... someone needs to provide for the green bear. anybody have a green bear?

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  89. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:40 PM

    hey- can i just dress my build a bear in something green?

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  90. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    http://www.dreamtimenewfs.com/A%20Team/Graphics/Orange%20Bear.jpg


    or i can blow up this and carry it around as orange bear. but a care bear acting as orange bear would be better.

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  91. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 8:55 PM

    Mr.Buxton, the last wilf reads: Clear use of sound effects, choral voice.....


    do we have to have this?

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  92. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    we have 50 minutes to practice on Friday, right? or 30? or something?

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  93. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 9:05 PM

    Sure Anisha

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  94. HanNovember 30, 2011 at 9:05 PM

    Good Night See everyone tommorow bye

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  95. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    han- to your description,we may have to add some story.

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  96. berrysweetπNovember 30, 2011 at 9:38 PM

    http://www.commentsyard.com/graphics/good-luck/good-luck16.gif


    green bear

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  97. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    Where can we post comments?

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  98. Canada rocksDecember 1, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    here

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  99. Canada rocksDecember 1, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    mr.buxton what home work do I not have to do!!!!!!!
    :) :) :)

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  100. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 4:17 PM

    100th comment and oh no I forgot my math study link could someone help me

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  101. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    also everyone on my team for the puppet thing. go to the wall wisher.

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  102. Canada rocksDecember 1, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    Rachel search it up on line thats how I didn't get in trouble for forgetting my stuff at school

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  103. Canada rocksDecember 1, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    .....1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  104. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    thks scott

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  105. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 4:44 PM

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  106. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    scott I can't find it on the internet. Where is it?

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  107. Canada rocksDecember 1, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    Bye every one I'm going to perth get there at 11 pm annoying!!!! If thats not all your questions then ask me on tuesday

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  108. Canada rocksDecember 1, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    type (study link 6.1 every day math) in search.

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  109. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    go to these website it might help you think of what to wear for colonial day.
    Girls
    - http://www.thinktanktoys.com/cache.php?img=http://img.thinktanktoys.com/images/vendors/rubies/927-main.jpg

    http://i01.i.aliimg.com/photo/v0/107017127/Dashiki_African_Style_sundress_Women_Dress_We.jpg

    Boys
    http://cdn.costumesupercenter.com/csc_inc/images/items/343x432/R10051.jpg

    http://cdn.costumesupercenter.com/csc_inc/images/items/343x432/DU218.jpg

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  110. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    Everyone can I just clarify this is the page

    https://452429803925162775-a-saline-k12-mi-us-s-sites.googlegroups.com/a/saline.k12.mi.us/elearning/e/fifth-grade/math-unit-6/5th_HomeLink6.1.pdf?attachauth=ANoY7cou6hhak8JAxXeYH36A6QOi04nvi8LeFEE1PNVaEb2J2Az2b88jzrGf0LztPR4HuVW985aZ59HJz3ZSbFpJ0vM2qlZpKWgwLHhzvIYV_XKqI1QeqEPmC3XpmoxzFex_qrflk9PT3nGQGHlCPE6pzJlo-OlheweDGMgSKe3hNS7jbaO9u7Cmg9wVlnpFykc2CddRnrPHEYpgI_SrrCbMzBBeoHAowCeOn0_hTsF8F9gJrtvH6ZoU4ciEwrUJAhUjknDBxgSM&attredirects=0

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  111. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 5:35 PM

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  112. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    for some reason IXL won't let me in. I typed in: username: rachellee799 password: sas123 and it still won't let me in.

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  113. berrysweetπDecember 1, 2011 at 5:43 PM

    maybe you mistyped something?

    my group- to get to the type with me: search: type with me. click on it. go to the new version. then type in exactly: Deforestation. Capitals count. no period.

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  114. Maddy ZDecember 1, 2011 at 6:16 PM

    Rohan, where is the old man's character part? Did you type it up yet? Please either put it on your blog or put it on the wallwisher as early as possible!

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  115. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    which IXl are we suppose to do?

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  116. Rachel LDecember 1, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    s.10
    for IXL

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  117. berrysweetπDecember 1, 2011 at 6:39 PM

    need to add my finishing touches to the script before I finish typing up the script for you guys to rehearse. Sorry!

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  118. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    Thanks Rachel

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  119. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    It's okay Anisha, its not your fault. You did a lot of work

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  120. Maddy ZDecember 1, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    Rohan! Please! I NEED your character part!

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  121. Camille B.December 1, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    RAHAN!!! WERE IS THE CHARACTER DISCRIPTION I LOOKED AN YOUR BLOG THE WALLWISHER AND HERE WERE ELSE CAN YOU PUT IT!

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  122. Maddy ZDecember 1, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    I need it by eight thirty at the latest, Rohan, and if you can get it to me sooner, please do that. Thanks!

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  123. HanDecember 1, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    good night everyone

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