Post links to your animotos for me to check out. Tomorrow, we begin writing your last persuasive essay.
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"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
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Mr. Buxton, I am so annoyed! The great wordle idea I had won't work out now! You are not allowed to save wordles, you can only print them out!
http://animoto.com/play/0lFGnLOWcghsR9u0HXhoGg
check out my animoto
Pretty good, Nakul.
No big things, but in a couple of places there are little corrections to make (or ponder over).
a) It says at one point, 'the why we fight?' either add a 'do' before 'we' or take out 'we' all together.
b) it says 'they must act because...' but since in the slide before it says something about 'they must act' too, you should just have the 'because' there and nothing else.
Very good! Are you done?
Maya - I'm about to cry for you! I hate it when any animal is put to sleep (unless of course it is a rat or insect!).
Questions coming up soon!
Maddy- You could scan the printed image and then use the scanned picture
nope just first draft! Thank you! Your feedback was excellent!
on the animoto, we have to have the thesis statement and the begginning of each power 2.
Your welcome, Anisha.
yeah but the beginning is basically the thesis statement without the opinion
Oops, I mean Nakul!
print it and take a picture of it and then upload it. you could also use seenly.com to take a picture
Every problem has a solution!
Mr.Buxton does mine look better except for Maddy's comments?
nakul,
has great potential...keep the images to PG! not sure the point you are trying to make about debt...
also get some of your own videos in there... great potential
Here are the questions -
1. Use a ruler and a straitedge to draw 2 parallel lines. Then draw another line that crosses both parallel lines.
2. Measure the 8 angles in your figure.
Write each measure inside the angle.
(bunch of space to do it)
3. What Patterns do you notice in your angle measures?
___________________________________________________
(5 more lines after that one)
PRACTICE:
4. 500 mL= _________L 5. 2.5 L= _________mL
6. 3,000 mL= __________L 7. 0.95 L= __________mL
8. 3,250 mL= __________ L 9. 0.045= ___________mL
Maya - when I put 'bunch of space to do it' after number 2, I meant to put it after number 1! Sorry.
What time is the final Mr. Buxton? Not like morning but when exactly e.g. 9:00
And for number 9, it's 0.045 L.
Maddy you mean straightedge not straitedge right?
Maya there's no need to do it as you won't understand the questions as you missed the lesson.
Yes, I do mean that, Nakul!
It's Ok. I understand the problems.
Swimming tomorrow!
Maya -
I made this for you!
http://photopeach.com/album/noft1r
Hope you like it!
here is a draft copy of my animoto. There is just one power 2 right now. I did the whole power 2.
So touching! Really great job Maddy! Sorry, but had to watch it!
It's okay, Anisha! I feel so bad right now!
Thank you sooooo much Maddy!
Mr. Buxton, I am having the worst time with animoto and I can't get a single thing to upload. I have almost everything that I have to put in except a few videos. Should I bring it in on a USB or what?
Your soooooo welcome, it was really all I could do.
Maya, look at the comments on Maddy's photopeach. I posted something more there.
http://animoto.com/play/LvMQRMzFZ3Ok6purj2X7mg
Improved version Draft No.2 Is it better?
What should I do!!!????? Animoto isn't working!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How is it not working?
Every time i try to upload ANYTHING it doesn't let me click on it or open it!!!!!!
Try using a different browser. or shut down your computer and start it up again. or check the internet connection
What is it everyone is talking about printing?
http://animoto.com/play/MKUqmKRSGnrdBqHdqQokoQ
good job nakul
Did King George III protect the patriots from the French/Indian war?
Great choice of music and nice topic Harrisen, but you do not explain HOW poverty can be stopped...what are your p2s? What HHH techniques have you used? How is speaking to who?
It is not persuasive as it stands
yes Han (from Native americans like Pontiac)
The seenly with wordle thing worked out! Yay!
In our animoto do we need to explain how to stop the problem?
Thank you Mr.Buxton
This is the URL to MY draft of the animoto, I will also post it on my blog in a minute.
http://animoto.com/play/J5PzxeFfYgzBAZYJuYpsvQ
For the last section, diabetes, I haven't go my P3s. The wordle thing is my restate NOT a P3. And for my second P2 I only have put in 2 P3s. Obviously it is not finished yet!
http://animoto.com/play/R44Wp7IwGxJAmt8Pb2iMkg
Animoto.
Good job, Alex! Some of your pictures (like the ones where it tell people what to do about the situations) are very smart! On the videos I can't hear at all, though. MAybe on your final draft be MUCH louder. Having some PP slides is good, but remember that we are trying to SHOW not TELL. It is very good, though!
How do you get that music? I couldn't find it.
Indie Rock, but what it is called is a secret, because this is Mr.Buxton's annual song.
BTW though, thanks for the feedback.
Good animoto Alex, but I couldn't hear your voice in the videos.
Artist: Pure Dream Ladder
Song: One More Day
Indie Rock That's Alex's song. If you want to know it's above the views on the right of the video
On 6.6 study link the 1st question what does it mean by describe a situation in which the data in the line plot might occur.
My 3rd and maybe final draft is coming up please comment and give feedback. Trying to reduce powerpoint slides! Only 1....
Animoto numero tres! (Animoto number 3 in Spanish I think)
http://animoto.com/play/D1kQjLCUdge0B3KdOMKjAg
My 2nd final draft is coming please comment
I'm gonna improve it more! Stand by for more!
Alex- lots of words on your animoto! more words than pictures in fact! Way more words!
Wrong, Nakul. We can say: Mey Animoto qe numero tres inta impoya!
( My third Animoto is to be improved!)
(I am Spanish).
Sorry, YOU can say.
i found my thumb drive :)
http://animoto.com/play/66Yv6fN41JylwRV1edyVSQ
Thats my video can i please have some feedback,
THX
for the animo to do we have to have our p3s also
yes but in picture or some media
I totally forgot to post this comment I wrote 2 hours ago!!! I tried with a different browser and it still won't work!!!! I have everything besides 2-3 videos all planned out but it won't upload. Can I just bring to school tomorrow to see what I did wrong?
no. He said he would like it if we had power 3's, but the requirement is the beginning of your power 2's and your thesis statement.
http://animoto.com/play/MZmNt16Vtexw6qghMAZNdQ
My latest improved one!
Guys please comment
Anisha, I have NOTHING on it right now!!!!!!!1 Help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY ADITYA!!!!!
I don't have enough time to do anything for my animoto now. I will just bring my USB in.
It's fine Caroline Mr.B will understand
Aditya what do you think about my animoto
So it won't load. Send me everything that you intend to put on the animoto. i will create an animoto for you. Technically, I am just putting the slides in order that you want them to be. you did all the work.
http://animoto.com/play/CxTmUJ3IjKGvn88oDyRvSw
is this too wordy?
Anisha what do you think??
Wow Anisha you are a really good friend; If i could i would give you 2 plus points.
Nakul its really good and i think the song matches your slides
about my animoto??
Thanks Aditya! Anisha what do you think about my animoto?? I think yours is good but it needs more description on your 3rd power 2
Nakul- I getting there! That was what I had so far. I am already onto editing.
Maybe a little too wordy?
no it's fine
HOW DO YOU DO HTML TAGS!! And some academic stuff. Which pics are not PG???
oh my God! All of these projects are making my desktop really cluttered!
Mr.Buxton my videos can I record them tomorrow?
My microphone doesn't work!!!!!
Right click-arrange by-name all clean!
Look below the comments box, Nakul. The only html you can't use is the one with the a . i would show you but then it would think i was using the tag. well, i guess i could do this: the one you can't use is this:
< a >
wow. thanks for that clean up thing, Nakul.
<b Hello!
Hello!
Is this slide okay:
The Future Generation:
http://embedit.in/customize/8XHzftPUaL#
< b > Thanks Anisha!
Nakul:
< b > Hello! < / b >
and there really is no spaces between them. I had to put them there or you wouldn't be able to see them.
Its not bad < b>
oh!
Thanks!
GOOD LUCK TO ANYONE FOR THE PATRICK HENRY SPEECH!!!!!!!!
oh. caroline, my email adress is
anisha.nilakantan@gmail.com
new and improved ( i hope! )
http://animoto.com/play/FfLx11hw7DPuzbzVWd6zkA
please give feedback
i am missing a lock and lock lunch box. anybody seen it?
Aditya, did yo find your USB?
My animoto link below! Sorry it's late!
http://animoto.com/play/3WaiPmX4VJehK0UHS6a9DQ
Sorry! I don't like people looking at my writing before it's done.
http://animoto.com/play/Ub8bVZD1zIaY122aA4v8qw
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