Post links to your animotos for me to check out. Tomorrow, we begin writing your last persuasive essay.
Don't forget to vote!
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better." Maya Angelou
Mr. Buxton, I am so annoyed! The great wordle idea I had won't work out now! You are not allowed to save wordles, you can only print them out!
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/0lFGnLOWcghsR9u0HXhoGg
ReplyDeletecheck out my animoto
Pretty good, Nakul.
ReplyDeleteNo big things, but in a couple of places there are little corrections to make (or ponder over).
a) It says at one point, 'the why we fight?' either add a 'do' before 'we' or take out 'we' all together.
b) it says 'they must act because...' but since in the slide before it says something about 'they must act' too, you should just have the 'because' there and nothing else.
Very good! Are you done?
Maya - I'm about to cry for you! I hate it when any animal is put to sleep (unless of course it is a rat or insect!).
Questions coming up soon!
Maddy- You could scan the printed image and then use the scanned picture
ReplyDeletenope just first draft! Thank you! Your feedback was excellent!
ReplyDeleteon the animoto, we have to have the thesis statement and the begginning of each power 2.
ReplyDeleteYour welcome, Anisha.
ReplyDeleteyeah but the beginning is basically the thesis statement without the opinion
ReplyDeleteOops, I mean Nakul!
ReplyDeleteprint it and take a picture of it and then upload it. you could also use seenly.com to take a picture
ReplyDeleteEvery problem has a solution!
Mr.Buxton does mine look better except for Maddy's comments?
ReplyDeletenakul,
ReplyDeletehas great potential...keep the images to PG! not sure the point you are trying to make about debt...
also get some of your own videos in there... great potential
Here are the questions -
ReplyDelete1. Use a ruler and a straitedge to draw 2 parallel lines. Then draw another line that crosses both parallel lines.
2. Measure the 8 angles in your figure.
Write each measure inside the angle.
(bunch of space to do it)
3. What Patterns do you notice in your angle measures?
___________________________________________________
(5 more lines after that one)
PRACTICE:
4. 500 mL= _________L 5. 2.5 L= _________mL
6. 3,000 mL= __________L 7. 0.95 L= __________mL
8. 3,250 mL= __________ L 9. 0.045= ___________mL
Maya - when I put 'bunch of space to do it' after number 2, I meant to put it after number 1! Sorry.
ReplyDeleteWhat time is the final Mr. Buxton? Not like morning but when exactly e.g. 9:00
ReplyDeleteAnd for number 9, it's 0.045 L.
ReplyDeleteMaddy you mean straightedge not straitedge right?
ReplyDeleteMaya there's no need to do it as you won't understand the questions as you missed the lesson.
ReplyDeleteYes, I do mean that, Nakul!
ReplyDeleteIt's Ok. I understand the problems.
ReplyDeleteSwimming tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteMaya -
ReplyDeleteI made this for you!
http://photopeach.com/album/noft1r
Hope you like it!
here is a draft copy of my animoto. There is just one power 2 right now. I did the whole power 2.
ReplyDeleteSo touching! Really great job Maddy! Sorry, but had to watch it!
ReplyDeleteIt's okay, Anisha! I feel so bad right now!
ReplyDeleteThank you sooooo much Maddy!
ReplyDeleteMr. Buxton, I am having the worst time with animoto and I can't get a single thing to upload. I have almost everything that I have to put in except a few videos. Should I bring it in on a USB or what?
ReplyDeleteYour soooooo welcome, it was really all I could do.
ReplyDeleteMaya, look at the comments on Maddy's photopeach. I posted something more there.
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/LvMQRMzFZ3Ok6purj2X7mg
ReplyDeleteImproved version Draft No.2 Is it better?
What should I do!!!????? Animoto isn't working!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHow is it not working?
ReplyDeleteEvery time i try to upload ANYTHING it doesn't let me click on it or open it!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTry using a different browser. or shut down your computer and start it up again. or check the internet connection
ReplyDeleteWhat is it everyone is talking about printing?
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/MKUqmKRSGnrdBqHdqQokoQ
ReplyDeletegood job nakul
ReplyDeleteDid King George III protect the patriots from the French/Indian war?
ReplyDeleteGreat choice of music and nice topic Harrisen, but you do not explain HOW poverty can be stopped...what are your p2s? What HHH techniques have you used? How is speaking to who?
ReplyDeleteIt is not persuasive as it stands
yes Han (from Native americans like Pontiac)
The seenly with wordle thing worked out! Yay!
ReplyDeleteIn our animoto do we need to explain how to stop the problem?
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr.Buxton
ReplyDeleteThis is the URL to MY draft of the animoto, I will also post it on my blog in a minute.
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/J5PzxeFfYgzBAZYJuYpsvQ
For the last section, diabetes, I haven't go my P3s. The wordle thing is my restate NOT a P3. And for my second P2 I only have put in 2 P3s. Obviously it is not finished yet!
http://animoto.com/play/R44Wp7IwGxJAmt8Pb2iMkg
ReplyDeleteAnimoto.
Good job, Alex! Some of your pictures (like the ones where it tell people what to do about the situations) are very smart! On the videos I can't hear at all, though. MAybe on your final draft be MUCH louder. Having some PP slides is good, but remember that we are trying to SHOW not TELL. It is very good, though!
ReplyDeleteHow do you get that music? I couldn't find it.
Indie Rock, but what it is called is a secret, because this is Mr.Buxton's annual song.
ReplyDeleteBTW though, thanks for the feedback.
Good animoto Alex, but I couldn't hear your voice in the videos.
ReplyDeleteArtist: Pure Dream Ladder
ReplyDeleteSong: One More Day
Indie Rock That's Alex's song. If you want to know it's above the views on the right of the video
On 6.6 study link the 1st question what does it mean by describe a situation in which the data in the line plot might occur.
ReplyDeleteMy 3rd and maybe final draft is coming up please comment and give feedback. Trying to reduce powerpoint slides! Only 1....
ReplyDeleteAnimoto numero tres! (Animoto number 3 in Spanish I think)
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/D1kQjLCUdge0B3KdOMKjAg
My 2nd final draft is coming please comment
ReplyDeleteI'm gonna improve it more! Stand by for more!
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ReplyDeleteAlex- lots of words on your animoto! more words than pictures in fact! Way more words!
ReplyDeleteWrong, Nakul. We can say: Mey Animoto qe numero tres inta impoya!
ReplyDelete( My third Animoto is to be improved!)
(I am Spanish).
Sorry, YOU can say.
ReplyDeletei found my thumb drive :)
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/66Yv6fN41JylwRV1edyVSQ
ReplyDeleteThats my video can i please have some feedback,
THX
for the animo to do we have to have our p3s also
ReplyDeleteyes but in picture or some media
ReplyDeleteI totally forgot to post this comment I wrote 2 hours ago!!! I tried with a different browser and it still won't work!!!! I have everything besides 2-3 videos all planned out but it won't upload. Can I just bring to school tomorrow to see what I did wrong?
ReplyDeleteno. He said he would like it if we had power 3's, but the requirement is the beginning of your power 2's and your thesis statement.
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/MZmNt16Vtexw6qghMAZNdQ
ReplyDeleteMy latest improved one!
Guys please comment
ReplyDeleteAnisha, I have NOTHING on it right now!!!!!!!1 Help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYAY ADITYA!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI don't have enough time to do anything for my animoto now. I will just bring my USB in.
ReplyDeleteIt's fine Caroline Mr.B will understand
ReplyDeleteAditya what do you think about my animoto
ReplyDeleteSo it won't load. Send me everything that you intend to put on the animoto. i will create an animoto for you. Technically, I am just putting the slides in order that you want them to be. you did all the work.
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/CxTmUJ3IjKGvn88oDyRvSw
ReplyDeleteis this too wordy?
Anisha what do you think??
ReplyDeleteWow Anisha you are a really good friend; If i could i would give you 2 plus points.
ReplyDeleteNakul its really good and i think the song matches your slides
about my animoto??
ReplyDeleteThanks Aditya! Anisha what do you think about my animoto?? I think yours is good but it needs more description on your 3rd power 2
ReplyDeleteNakul- I getting there! That was what I had so far. I am already onto editing.
ReplyDeleteMaybe a little too wordy?
ReplyDeleteno it's fine
ReplyDeleteHOW DO YOU DO HTML TAGS!! And some academic stuff. Which pics are not PG???
ReplyDeleteoh my God! All of these projects are making my desktop really cluttered!
ReplyDeleteMr.Buxton my videos can I record them tomorrow?
ReplyDeleteMy microphone doesn't work!!!!!
ReplyDeleteRight click-arrange by-name all clean!
ReplyDeleteLook below the comments box, Nakul. The only html you can't use is the one with the a . i would show you but then it would think i was using the tag. well, i guess i could do this: the one you can't use is this:
ReplyDelete< a >
wow. thanks for that clean up thing, Nakul.
ReplyDelete<b Hello!
ReplyDeleteHello!
ReplyDeleteIs this slide okay:
ReplyDeleteThe Future Generation:
http://embedit.in/customize/8XHzftPUaL#
< b > Thanks Anisha!
ReplyDeleteNakul:
ReplyDelete< b > Hello! < / b >
and there really is no spaces between them. I had to put them there or you wouldn't be able to see them.
ReplyDeleteIts not bad < b>
ReplyDeleteoh!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteGOOD LUCK TO ANYONE FOR THE PATRICK HENRY SPEECH!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteoh. caroline, my email adress is
ReplyDeleteanisha.nilakantan@gmail.com
new and improved ( i hope! )
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/FfLx11hw7DPuzbzVWd6zkA
please give feedback
i am missing a lock and lock lunch box. anybody seen it?
ReplyDeleteAditya, did yo find your USB?
ReplyDeleteMy animoto link below! Sorry it's late!
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/3WaiPmX4VJehK0UHS6a9DQ
Sorry! I don't like people looking at my writing before it's done.
ReplyDeletehttp://animoto.com/play/Ub8bVZD1zIaY122aA4v8qw