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Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Dialogue Practice

H/W
Study Link 10.2
Pan Balance Problem Recap
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vbX83p0xJ9c




Movie Trailer
work on the writing portion for two boxes for your movie trailer. This is approx. oneparagraph per box. Tomorrow you will start collecting digital resources for your movie. Be thinking about how you will 'show' your plot with images.

Think about what made this an engaging trailer.
http://youtu.be/fwavA7RIVpQ What will you be able to do to make yours interesting?

Tomorrow's Book club discussion will be shorter than normal. All you need to have done is read thes section you were assigned and bring a discussion statement/opinion. e.g. The use of typical, uncreative archetpyes in this novel makes the story too predictable.

Social Studies letter: Due in Wed

How to make a glog: Recap

48 comments:

Maya S. said...

Maddy- In case you no longer have the chatzy for our fantasy piece, here it is:
http://us5.chatzy.com/46390685316290


THIS CHATZY IS FOR OUR FANTASY PIECE!
I just wanted to make sure Mr. Buxton knew that.

Arielle said...

Hi maya, can we get started on the letter also?!



:) Arielle

Nick said...

EMA-can you please give me your email so I can share the google doc with you?

Emma F. said...

Just put this in
emma35502

berrysweetπ said...

Dearest Queen Victoria,
Sir Charles, your humble advisor, is at your service. The report held before you shall be the most important Singapore shall ever set before your eyes. The colony crowned by the British has developed a mind of its own. The British may lose their control over the citizens of Singapore. To avert this drastic situation, the British shall have to change some of their ways of ruling. Changes that could possibly be enforced are the creation of equilibrium and the banishing of the Chinese secret societies.
Personally, I believe that discrimination should be greatly encouraged. However, the ungrateful Asians of Singapore shall start protesting against the discrimination. If the protests begin, word will travel and


This is just for me. I need a transport.

Nick said...

its not working emma

Hamadude said...

Riya please go on the google doc I shared with you for the letter.

Nick said...

Ok emma I've shared the google doc with you

Arielle said...
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Sabine said...

mr buxton for each box needing a paragraph, what if your box is a caption? e.g. the note is the key.

Arielle said...
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Caroline said...

should we print our RLA homework?

Caroline said...

nick after emmas email u put

@sas.edu.sg

Caroline said...

arielle, i would just start working on it anyways cause u said u didnt do much either

Caroline said...

nevermind nick

Hamadude said...
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Arielle said...

Caroline- ok

Rachel L said...

Mr.B are you going anywhere for spring break?

Nick said...

MR.BUXTON-do you think this is a good Idea??? so a boy that lives in the forest of a mideval realm (dragons,knights) is trying to stop the antagonist (king with misused power) from cutting down the trees and killing all life in the forest. So he sets out on a jorney of some sort to call apon the forest (summon dragons or somthing else) to defeat the king.

Nick said...

EMMA-please go on the google doc

Jacqueline said...

Caroline, what soundtrack do you want for the trailer?

Jacqueline said...

Link to Chatzy! (only for Riya and Han). This is for our Social Studies Glogster! :)

Jacqueline said...

http://us5.chatzy.com/49574666156083

Jacqueline said...

If the password doesn't work then use the first three even numbers at the end of our code password NO CAPITALS OR SPACES

Rohan said...

Do we need to print the fantasy piece draft???

Nick said...

yes rohan

Nick said...

we do

berrysweetπ said...

mr.Buxton, can you please put the WILF for the Social Studies letter on the blog again?

Maddy Z said...

Can anyone give me a list of some archetypes?

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Rohan said...

nick, can i write it, my printer is not working

Maddy Z said...

Please?
I have...
The Barrier
The Hidden Power
The Villain

Nick said...

rohan I guess you can oh and maddy
here are a few more- the side kick
the willing hero

Maya S. said...

The willing hero
The unwilling hero
The mentor
The comic sidekick
The object of beauty
The barrier

Nick said...

EMMA GET ON THE GOOGLE DOC!!!! YOU HAVN'T EVEN COME ON ONCE!!!! ITS SUPPOST TO BE DONE BY TOMMOROW!!! DO YOU RELISE THAT???!!???

Nick said...

Fine.....I guess I'll have to work on it myself

Emma F. said...

Dear Queen Victoria,

I, Sir Stamford Raffles, have come to the realization that there are multiple dilemmas facing us in the creation of our new settlement. Thank you for bestowing the Crown colony name upon us; unfortunately, it has attracted many mafias and gangs. In my opinion, the government must act by putting more money into the police fund to counter these criminal elements. As result our colony will be more prosperous.

Currently, merchants are putting pressure on the government for additional medical care, education, and employment. If we do not get the additional medical aid, smallpox and cholera will overrun Singapore. We already need to quarantine many sick citizens. Additionally, sadly I am getting complaints about not all schools being treated equally in terms of quality education. I think that the government should put some effort into equal rights and employment as that will make the country a much more civilized place with much more trade. Luckily more jobs are becoming available and the economy is growing.

Another realization is that members are taking part in robberies and gang fights. There are all ready two groups, the coolies and the Laborers. The reason why they are doing this is because the Chinese are being discriminated against at the moment by Malays. The Chinese are the biggest population of Singapore. We cannot let Singapore turn into an unprosperous place. We must hold our ground and put more money into the police force as they will handle the situation.

Trade has been successful and continues to grow at a high rate. There has been a 50% increase over the past five years. The fish, rice, and other raw material trades are the most successful. The one problem is if we want Singapore to look like a safe successful country, we must treat its citizens with the appropriate human rights. The current Chief of Police, Thomas Dunman has been throwing immigrants in cells and beat them red. I firmly believe you should fire him or move him down and replace him with a more experienced officer.



Sincerely,
Sir Stamford Raffles

Emma F. said...

Its good right

Nick said...

ya

Maddy Z said...

Thanks Maya and Nick!

Nick said...

No prob
LOL

berrysweetπ said...

Thank you, Emma, for reminding me that you need to have some positives for the letter. I would also like to remind you that this is the British as Rulers, so I'm not sure that mentioning that trade was good would be the better option. I would say what is going well in the economy that the British controlled. However, the choice is entirely yours.

Maddy Z said...

Mine is REALLY long, is that okay?

Hamadude said...

yep i think so

berrysweetπ said...

So is mine, Maddy. I actually printed mine on off - white paper and crumpled it up to make it look like an old document.

I can only do one paragraph because all my other slides have basically everything done.

berrysweetπ said...

Monday, March 21st, 1824
Dearest Queen Victoria,
Sir Charles, your humble advisor, is at your service. The report held before you shall be the most important Singapore shall ever set before your eyes. The colony crowned by the British has developed a mind of its own. The British may lose their control over the citizens of Singapore. To avert this drastic situation, the British shall have to change some of their ways of ruling. Changes that could possibly be enforced are the creation of equilibrium and the banishing of the Chinese secret societies.
Personally, I believe that discrimination should be greatly encouraged. After all, we should be treated based on where we stand in life. However, the ungrateful Asians of Singapore shall start protesting against the discrimination. If the protests begin, word will travel, and in my vision, Singapore will not be as successful as it is currently. How we can stop discrimination is simple but complicated. It will be simple to issue the laws, but it will be complicated to persuade residents of Singapore to follow them. The laws to be issued, however, cannot simply state to stop discrimination. The laws need to be specific. As an example, ‘Asians are not to have separate places in a railway than European’ would be an ideal law. Another ideal law could be that ‘No biases for British supporters will important decisions such as job placements’. In this way, we can lower the percentage of Asians that are con British.
The Chinese Secret Societies have aroused many problems. These problems may become one mega problem; therefore, we should try especially hard to eliminate most, if not all, of the Secret Societies. Some of the havoc these particular groups have cause include not paying their loans, robbing people of their goods, and generally having a negative impact on business. The Chinese Secret Societies have also been involved in riots and other violence, such as killing. Overall, the government in Singapore needs to try harder to banish as much as possible of the Chinese Secret Societies.
Even though Singapore has yet a long way to come to achieve the perfect economy, Singapore has certain achievements already. As I proudly say, the British government has been responsible for many, if not all, of them. Britain has agreed to pay for Singapore until it can fund itself. Because Singapore is receiving the money it needs to function, the trading is growing and growing. The economy is reaching higher and higher. Additionally, the British government is hiring Malay and/or Chinese speakers. Furthermore, the policeman have proper training and a great pay.
Warmest regards,
Sir Charles

Maya S. said...

I just remebered


ROHAN AND CAROLINE, TOMORROW IS THE KMO COMPETITION!! REMEMBER TO WEAR YOUR SHIRT! :D

Riya D. said...

Carter print out the letter i seneded it to you pls. Also can you print two my printer does not work:( Thanks

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