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Unit 7 Sentence Fluency
Extended Metaphor: Further Examples:
Poetry Unit: Learning Reflections
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Dictation Emails - Change your parents live by sharing the trick you learned in school today! They will LOVE you so much more!
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Tuesday, February 4, 2014
Monday, February 3, 2014
Faithful Elephants
Enjoy Alexa's EXCELLENT, authentic reading response in its entirity. The authenticity of this piece and the engaging way that Alexa presents her ideas are techniques worth imitating.
"Learning is the transition from imitation to innovation"
Finish your 'thinking and talking about reading' entry on, 'Faithful Elephants.' What is the story trying to teach us? -
Students who were absent need to read this story. Start on page. 2
Faithful Elephants and complete a brief response. What is the story really about? Approx 100 words.
Membean
You should complete a minimum of 55 minutes of Membean practice this week. (x30minutes in school x25minutes at home. Spread your home study over a number of nights.) Learning Behavior grades go down if you do not complete the required practice time.
Extended Metaphor Poem: Due Thur
You must add a new slide to your Poetry Portfolio with your extended metaphor.
Grading Criteria
- You poem uses a single 'anchor' metaphor and continues to 'extend' that metaphor throughout the poem
- Other metaphors that are linked to the anchor metaphor can be clearly identified in the poem
- Your poem communicates a message/idea. - e.g. My life ain't no crystal stair - the idea is that she has had a tough life, but never gave up and keep reaching other goals.
- Poetry format and structure with an effective title
- Minimum 12 lines
This assignment is simple testing whether you can write a poem that contains an extended metaphor. Remember, not every line needs to be a metaphor.
Resubmitting Assignments: New System
I have added a file to the right side of the blog for resubmitting assignments. If you do not turn your work in on time or wish to resubmitted, you must put the link to your resubmitted work in this file if you want to get your work regraded. If you are absent from school, any missed work should be resubmitted here. Work that is not turned in on time, automatically receives a failing grade until it is resubmitted. To get this grade changes, it is your responsibility then to get the work to me. I will NOT chase you up for work.
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Extended metaphor
Saturday, February 1, 2014
Mentor Examples
Reading Responses: Why am I not getting an 'A'?
Look at how these students approached their reading responses to get an insight into what needs to be done to score the highest grades.
Can you spot this in Teagan's work?
-use of a 'warrant'
-use of what the book teaches us
-use of quoting to support your opinion.
-use of connection to other stories Importance of the title?
-Elysia's: Eggs
-Devon's: The Great Gilly Hopkins This response focused on just one read flag moment. She scored highly, b/c once quoting the moment, she then effectively interprets the situation.
Can you spot this in Teagan's work?
-use of a 'warrant'
-use of what the book teaches us
-use of quoting to support your opinion.
-use of connection to other stories Importance of the title?
-Elysia's: Eggs
-Devon's: The Great Gilly Hopkins This response focused on just one read flag moment. She scored highly, b/c once quoting the moment, she then effectively interprets the situation.
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reading responses
Wednesday, January 29, 2014
Extended Metaphor
Why is this poem an extended metaphor?
Constructing an extended metaphor
Report Card: Learning Reflections
C/D Class Learning Class
E/F Class Learning Class
G/H Class Learning Class
Missing You...
Constructing an extended metaphor
Report Card: Learning Reflections
C/D Class Learning Class
E/F Class Learning Class
G/H Class Learning Class
Missing You...
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Extended metaphor
Tuesday, January 28, 2014
Gather Ye Rose Buds While Thee May...
Enjoy Elena's engaging work...
Use the file in class. Gather Ye Rose Buds While Thee May...
Make YOUR lives extraordinary
H/W
Use the file in class. Gather Ye Rose Buds While Thee May...
Make YOUR lives extraordinary
H/W
- 15 minutes of Membean
- Reading Response video due Wed
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