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Monday, November 14, 2011

Qtr 2 Week 5 Day 1 - Persuasive Writing Draft

Math
Studylink 5.5 IXL C.6 (master) and C.9 (practice)

Writing
Finish typing up your first draft of your essay. Use the power plan color code. You must bring in HARD COPY a draft version. DO NOT FORGET to do this.  Do you power 2s fit your topic sentence?  Have you reiterated three specific persuasive points in your restate?

Do your have clear sentence fluency?

Reading
Keep your log up to date. Which new reading techniques will you focus on this week?

46 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mr. Buxton, this is a hypothetical question. If you forget your reading log at school, can you record your reading at home on a sheet then fill it up at school or does it not count? I have my reading log just saying. I need it for future reference. Thanks, Nakul

Anonymous said...

Well, I think I have it.

Maddy Z said...

I presume you can, Nakul. And I know it was a hypothetical question.

Maya S. said...

Mr. Buxton, you know how you said that our reading time and pages read should be equal (or you read more pages than the minutes read), but if they aren't you will question us. What about when you stop to write down your thinking? Would it be okay if you wrote one sticky note and read 16 pages in 19 minutes? Could we make up for reading slowly by reading faster next time? Or should we always write down what we are thinking?

Han said...

Yah! I mastered the IXL.

I think.....

Maddy Z said...

Great question, Maya! I was wondering about that, too.

Anonymous said...

I think you can subtract the total of seconds for each sticky to get your final one or just paste your stickies and write them at the end

Anonymous said...

and thanks maddy! I just realized it was true! I think I did leave it at school! Maya remember Mr. you know who and Mrs.Early tomorrow. Don't you think we're unlucky!

berrysweetπ said...

assume nothing!

nakul- yeah. we are going to time how long it takes us to write our sticky notes

anyone who is arguing about needing a cell-phone- if you realized you are a power 3 short, here is a good one, and is realistic because it just happened to me: EASA has just ended, your mom didn't pick up the phone when you tried to call her using the school phone. you had to hurry off to the bus. when you come home, ou find that the lift is closed off. you travel by the fire lift. when you reach home, you bang and ring the doorbell for around 10 minutes, but nobody replies. if you had a cell-phone, you could have called your mom and asked her to open the door.

berrysweetπ said...

I think you guys mean rhetorical, not hypothetical.

Maddy Z said...

Yah, you're right, Anisha. I did mean rhetorical.

Maddy Z said...

Nakul - Who's Mr. you know who? And don't you think it's a little mean to say you're unlucky to be going to that teacher?

Maddy Z said...
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Unknown said...

yes... that is perfectly fine nakul. It's not about msaking mistakes, it's about finding ways to correct them

Good question - I completely agree that reading rates will change. My guide was just a guide over multiple sessions, not somethig written in stone.

anisha-- you have too many 'you's in that passage

berrysweetπ said...

i know, i was just doing it casually without bothering to rid the banned words. well, i guess i should have because we trying to break a habit.

berrysweetπ said...

mr buxton, for the blogs, i just discovered something. someone can put a post under 2 labels. just put a comma between the two labels.

berrysweetπ said...

ATTENTION! MATH OLYMPIADS TOMORROW! REMEMBER TO BRING YOUR GREEN T-SHIRTS!!!!!!! WOULDN'T IT BE COOL IF EVERYONE BROUGHT THEIRS?

berrysweetπ said...

things, han?

berrysweetπ said...

people- i am collecting some data. please answer the questions at the bottom of my blog. also, please give me some tips for my blog.

Han said...

When it says keep your log up to date does it mean our reading log with all the tabs, like letters or the reading log thing we got just today in our book bag?

Han said...

Wait, Anisha what are you talking about?

Han said...

YAH! I finished all my homework! :):):0;0

berrysweetπ said...

what do you mean what am i talking about?

AJDForTheFuture said...

Anisha, watch how many comments you make! A lot of them are not acedemic.
Yes, Han, all the tabs.

berrysweetπ said...

Here is something I got out of the apple dictionary. this is for those of you who said that deliciousness isn't a word:

delicious |diˈli sh əs|
adjective
highly pleasant to the taste : delicious home-baked brown bread.
• delightful : a delicious irony.
DERIVATIVES
deliciously adverb
deliciousness noun
ORIGIN Middle English (also in the sense [characterized by sensuous indulgence] ): via Old French from late Latin deliciosus, from Latin deliciae (plural) ‘delight, pleasure.’

berrysweetπ said...

Alex- they are all somehow academic in my mind.

Aditya.k said...

should this sentence be like this:

In the first place our bus lady is prejudiced, harsh, and nasty which makes her undoubtedly the meanest bus lady in the school.

or like this:

In the first place our bus lady is prejudiced, harsh, and nasty which makes her undoubtedly the meanest bus lady in the school for a variety of dreadful reasons

berrysweetπ said...

anybody in GATE: Does anybody get the study link? I am lost. :O

Anonymous said...

But Maddy!! HE does creep us out and he embarrassed us infront of his class!!! By he I mean Mr.Kennedy! He scares us and he insults us! Well he doen't insult us but make us feel guilty. And Anisha, I do mean hypothetical. Hypothetical means if. Like If I die what will happen? IF you die it's not like your dead right?

Anonymous said...

Nice word Aditya! Prejudiced! Anisha I don't get it either. I'll ask Mrs.Shaw in the morning. You can come with me too!

Maddy Z said...

Well if you guys (Anisha and Nakul) don't get it, I probably won't either. But I'll look at it and try first. Thank you SO much for the Math Olympiads reminder, Anisha. I get it now, Nakul.

Caroline said...

han, since you showed me the 8th grade thing on ixl, i started doing positives and negatives in 8th grade. I eventually figured out that it had nothing to do with the lesson that was taught today.

Anonymous said...

So You guys want to come to Mrs.Shaw's together? I'll be at the school between 6:50 and 7:00 but I might oversleep like I've done for the last 4 days. ( I was sick!)

Maddy Z said...

I get problems 1 and 3 but 2 and 4 are not making much sense. If you read the problem hard enough for 1 and 3 you should easily get an answer!

Maya S. said...

Anisha & Nakul- I made a screenr to help you with the SL

Maya S. said...

Oops! forgot the link
http://www.screenr.com/BNFs

berrysweetπ said...

Maya the Screenr Master! You love screenr as much I as I love technology! I made 2 comments on your screenr. REALLY HELPFUL! Little chatty.

Maya S. said...

Thanks for the comments Anisha. I don't think I have that application, nut I found my geometry template. Whew!

berrysweetπ said...

Maya, you need to buy a replacement if you can't find it. Also, how are you going to actually use the temple online?

P.S. I thought you were calling me a nut at first, but then I realized you meant "but".

berrysweetπ said...

Maddy if you are having trouble with 2 and 4, Maya explains 2 quite well on the screenr.

berrysweetπ said...

Sorry, typo. Instead of temple I meant template.

berrysweetπ said...

sorry maya thought you found an online one

Anonymous said...

Anisha the Person? Anyways thanks Maya. Was really helpful. Another way to make it better is if your printer has a scanner as well. Place it where you photo copy things. (This is for macs only) go to your system preferences. Go to Print and Fax. Go to the scan tab and click open scanner. Then click scan and choose to open it in preview. You can then email it or put it up on your blog etc.

Anonymous said...

Anisha also, don't copy definitions of dictionary.com because it was not in your words and COOL is going to be a banned word so we should start practicing to NOT use the word.

Anonymous said...

And thanks for the reminder as well.

berrysweetπ said...

nakul- i said it was from apple dictionary so that people know that that definition wasn't mine.

yes, i am Anisha the Person. i am now a qualified person.

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