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25 comments:
should i keep the third stansa or get rid of it help!!!
thanks
Darkness creeps across the sky
Bird’s song is becoming undone
Bading the light good buy
The Witching hour has begun
Tiptoeing through the shadowy halls
Starring at every inch that I see
Scary pictures on the walls
Hands shaking, wishing I wasn’t me
Trees sway in the breeze
Looking hopefully for the sun’s beam
Giving myself a tight squeeze
Wishing this all was a dream
Chattering noises fill my ears
Picking up speed I see,
My comfy bed start to appear
Reaching my bed, I finally feel free
can some one proof read mine '
“The Truth Hurts but it Sets You Free”
Your friend trips and gets hit with a dodge ball,
she takes her self out
As she slowly walked off the court
her head is high and a smile is on her face
“the truth hurts but it sets you free”
The football fans were silent
As the ball soars like an eagle
The wide receiver is sprinting down the field
as he catches the game winning pass
The crowd roars, as the player tells the ref
that his foot was out of bounds No touch down
Two strokes away from victory
with the pen in sight
The golfer accidentally taps the ball without the ref seeing
after he finishes the hole he admits what he did,
victory slips out of his hands
‘’the truth hurts but it sets you free’’
lauren i think you should keep thethird line
Will i really like your title and how you repeated it. also you poem is great.
Um, Lauren its okay and u should keep the third stanza ,but it doesnt make since your last line saying free.
bekah,
what I ment by i finally feel free is that I am relieved from the darkness
thanks wyatt
Does my poem sound okay? Can some PLEASE HELP with my third stanza I NEED one more line !~~~A clogging know within your throat
The darkness deep in your heart
Like a blaring fire ready to start
Hardship turned into unfathomable art
Swollen eyes as tears flow down
Sorrow from others after breakdown
A sighting afar after having a frown
Walking home wanting to bellow
Tasting the wide blue skies above
Polished bright sun brings me aglow
All forgiven now its hollow
Will, which Will are you
A pasture of sorrow
My eyes blink continuously
Sadly not stopped by the tears
Listening to my cracking voice
Hoping that nobody would hear
Vivid names shouted out at me
Are etched in my mind to stay
Pain explodes inside my hart
Smiles gone astray
Walking up to my friends
Their eyes role right at me
Rejections swallow up my sole
Their backs are all that's left to see
All the things that could go wrong
Have gone wrong for me
the what crushes all the pain
Is the laughter and the glee
My poem's Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost.
the comment above was me sophie h
all we have for homework is math, finishing poem, getting a poem from our parents, and grammar packet???????
Mr. Buxton i made a book called Peter the Panda! Please watch i uploaded pictures of New York
yello! this is my poem, and please comment on it! I am willing to change it, but i just want someone elses opinion OK Enjoy:
Choosing to be Genius
Andrew Egge
A needle in the haystack
The “Outliers”
Once mind set: no turning back
Willing to sacrifice to reach ever higher
Amazing inventions made with brains barely
man
Atomic bomb, for better or for worse
Made to be a mass killing plan?
A brilliant idea or a diabolical curse
Genius good and genius bad
Evil genius: a story itself
Noble and evil: both this world has had
Reality tells as much as tales on a shelf
Not knowledge, smarts, or what one has in the
head
The real test is who has applied
Many, many smart people have said:
Go the extra mile, the extra inch: they haven’t
lied
Thanks for reading! :D
i dont know about your poem Andrew it doesnt have much balance and why do u put in the semicolons like this ":" after a few words it may need some work and i dont get what your writing about and can u comment on mine?
wyatt it is will t
Mr.Buxton,
What is the assignment objective for our poem??
Catie nelson
Mr. Buxton does is this poem to you "classic" and will i be able to use it? its by Robert Frost~It went many years,
But at last came a knock,
And I thought of the door
With no lock to lock.
I blew out the light,
I tip-toed the floor,
And raised both hands
In prayer to the door.
But the knock came again
My window was wide;
I climbed on the sill
And descended outside.
Back over the sill
I bade a "Come in"
To whoever the knock
At the door may have been.
So at a knock
I emptied my cage
To hide in the world
And alter with age.
sorry will i be able to use it for reading aloud
Mr.Buxton,
I amde a book on zooburst. It is about a monkey name Joe. The two pages before the last are mixed up.
Martha Wright, you still need to have the interpretation (meaning) of the poem
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