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C/D Yasmin - you are at the top for your class for time spent studying...Bravo
Today, we learned some steps in order to create a strong close to our essays.
Use these steps to write your concluding paragraph.
Mentor: Claim - Middle students need to learn to use better listening skills during instructional sessions
Key point: Don’t use to CONCLUDE - anywhere else in your piece!
1) Transitional (To summarize, In closing, Clearly, Without question)
2) Restated thesis (said in different words
3) BEST two or three researched facts said differently - Make it clear that you are representing the data using 'referencing' phraseology
3b) Optional - Revisit an anecdote - close the story
4) Call to action (Tell your audience critics or supporters to do something!)
5) Prognosticating (You get what you want - what changes?)
To reiterate, for consistent and long lasting academic progress to occur, 7th grade students need to learn and consistently implement effective listening skills during instructional sessions. A poll of 300 teachers showed that almost 90% of these educators always provide verbal clues to test content during their teaching. Moreover, the findings of the Burton survey, ‘Skills for the 21st Century’ showed that being an effective listening has the single most impact on academic performance. Stories like Mary Jones experience will cease to exist if students learn to become active and not passive listeners in school. The next time a student in a classroom is being disruptive, off task, or simply not paying attention to the instructional material, this individual should be politely redirected and reminded of his learning responsibilities. Who knows? Perhaps a time will come in the future when a visitor to any forward thinking school can wander into any classroom and see only engaged, attentive well focused students involved in learning.
Why no green?
Put your conclusions in the file (see Monday's post) for inspection.
FINAL PIECE: Due Friday
G/H - Yours will be due - Next Monday.
12 comments:
Thank you Mr. Buxton for posting the stpes of a conclusion. I don't know why but I like steps to get to a final product/project. Thank you!
Maybe because it is a path - and we can all follow paths...
thank you for your endless positive attitude...
I really enjoyed today. The more and more we learn the better we will get. I feel as though everyone including my self have grown a lot with this research based argument.
Quick question.
Can we edit our intro to get a better grade.
I want to say Yes Jessie but I am actually not sure...
Of course Jessica! That's the whole purpose of him grading it! Fix it to get the A!
yes - i will not count the intro. grades in the final report card. The idea was for you to see where you are. Although, the final piece will grade the intro.
nice repeated comparative +1
Can I still edit my conclusion paragraph tomorrow even if I finished today?
CONGRATS Yassi(Yasmin)
Of course you can Yasmin!
Membean superstar... now I know why you know all those new words...
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