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Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Concluding Paragraph

Membean Assessment tomorrow - Make sure you know the roots that you have met. These questions might trip you up. All these roots are individual based on your progress and are on your dashboard. e.g. see below


Students mentioned below are recommended to do an extra 10 mins of practice tonight:
 Kira Sehgal, Lukas Daniel-Pedersen, Samuel Bodden, Sonia Kingsley.   The Membean system requires recent practice. 
10 minutes of additional practice is suggested for everybody as a refresher ( especially if you didn't practice after Monday night) Optional!
Just out of interest: these images show how much time each student has spend studying Membean this week. The most at the top. The least at the bottom. Of course,  I am to going to say whose name the charts go with, but where do you think you are? E/F class - David - yours is at the top for the most studying!!! Well done!

E/F
C/D Yasmin - you are at the top for your class for time spent studying...Bravo



Today, we learned some steps in order to create a strong close to our essays.


Use these steps to write your concluding paragraph.

Mentor: Claim - Middle students need to learn to use better listening skills during instructional sessions


Key point: Don’t use to CONCLUDE - anywhere else in your piece!

1) Transitional (To summarize, In closing, Clearly, Without question)
2) Restated thesis (said in different words
3) BEST two or three researched facts said differently - Make it clear that you are representing the data using 'referencing' phraseology
3b) Optional - Revisit an anecdote - close the story
4) Call to action  (Tell your audience critics or supporters to do something!)
5) Prognosticating (You get what you want - what changes?)


To reiterate, for consistent and long lasting academic progress to occur, 7th grade students need to learn and consistently implement effective listening skills during instructional sessions.  A poll of 300 teachers showed that almost 90% of these educators always provide verbal clues to test content during their teaching. Moreover, the  findings of the Burton survey, ‘Skills for the 21st Century’ showed that  being an effective listening has the single most impact on academic performance. Stories like  Mary Jones experience will cease to exist if students learn to become active and not passive listeners in school. The next time a student in a classroom is being disruptive, off task, or simply not paying attention to the instructional material, this individual should be politely redirected and reminded of his learning responsibilities. Who knows? Perhaps a time will come in the future when a visitor to any forward thinking school can wander into any classroom and see only engaged, attentive well focused students involved in learning.

Why no green?

Put your conclusions in the file (see Monday's post) for inspection.

FINAL PIECE: Due Friday
G/H - Yours will be due - Next Monday.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thank you Mr. Buxton for posting the stpes of a conclusion. I don't know why but I like steps to get to a final product/project. Thank you!

Unknown said...

Maybe because it is a path - and we can all follow paths...

thank you for your endless positive attitude...

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed today. The more and more we learn the better we will get. I feel as though everyone including my self have grown a lot with this research based argument.

Anonymous said...

Quick question.
Can we edit our intro to get a better grade.

Anonymous said...

I want to say Yes Jessie but I am actually not sure...

Anonymous said...

Of course Jessica! That's the whole purpose of him grading it! Fix it to get the A!

Unknown said...

yes - i will not count the intro. grades in the final report card. The idea was for you to see where you are. Although, the final piece will grade the intro.

nice repeated comparative +1

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Anonymous said...

Can I still edit my conclusion paragraph tomorrow even if I finished today?

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Anonymous said...

CONGRATS Yassi(Yasmin)

Unknown said...

Of course you can Yasmin!

Membean superstar... now I know why you know all those new words...

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